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washingliquid
08-09-2008, 04:05 AM
So, I whipped up an incomplete anim. Put it on washingliquid.deviantart.com/art/Incomplete-Epics-94218171 because anti-up just doesn't care about me anyomre.... (*sobs*)

So, any pointers? Hints? Tips?

Bonk
08-09-2008, 05:03 AM
Not bad, but it's messy.

Make it bigger, for a start. I know it looks smoother and better when it is smaller, but it is a strain for the rest of us.

The walking looks wonky, and most of the actions are jerky (like the leg slam). In real life, when someone does something, their whole body moves regardless of what they're doing. In most of your movements, only the limb that is doing the action moves, so it looks unrealistic.

Also, the pace of the animation is a bit too fast. You can't really comprehend what is going on too well. Flame looked good though, I guess.

And make sure they stay on the ground ;)

Freddeh
08-09-2008, 06:04 AM
Stay on the ground as bonk just said.
Watch tutorials on physics, movements and such.
Keep animating, don't stop.
Everyone can improve pretty much in a matter of a few days.

washingliquid
08-09-2008, 07:08 AM
Many thanks! I'll see to it that it gets done. Soon.

Ugh, homework....

dawG
08-09-2008, 08:05 AM
http://washingliquid.deviantart.com/art/Incomplete-Epics-94218171
There you go.

Well pretty much like Freddeh said.
Keep animating.