View Full Version : My newest anim so far...

08-10-2008, 10:34 PM
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any good? cc plz

08-10-2008, 11:36 PM
Bump, can some1 plz cc PLZ!!!!!

08-11-2008, 12:19 AM
meh, its a good animation, and i mean good in terms of easing, smothness,etc. but the actual animation is boring.

08-11-2008, 12:31 AM
lol, how could i make it, unboring?

08-11-2008, 09:30 AM
very stiff and jumpy, and the physics were a little off.

08-11-2008, 09:45 AM
it was stiff?
the physics,yhea, i know there were off
my bad abt those

0esuf rewop
08-11-2008, 09:53 AM
the jumps and flips didn't look right

08-11-2008, 01:15 PM
its been some time since I gave critique.
Work on that

08-11-2008, 04:34 PM
good but a bit boring

08-11-2008, 04:36 PM
physics need some work also stiff and tyou need to put better movements in!

08-11-2008, 07:57 PM
meh, its a good animation, and i mean good in terms of easing, smothness,etc. but the actual animation is boring.
same way i feel!

08-12-2008, 08:06 AM
First punch didnt look like it had enough power. The stance before he jumps is fine. But when he leaps, his head/backbone moves backwards and then forward. I dont think that's the way to go. And if you wnat to do a flip, try doing it right after the jump stance. Well you can do it in the middle of a jump, but make the flip go faster. That one seems like, choppy =o. While he was jumping I liked how your ground got lower, that was a nice effect, =D. I think there should be tremor when he hits the ground, and I think there could be a better landing stance than that, because he looks like he's about to slip. I think you'd need to speed up the flip in order to get that stance. That kick was weird in my opinion, but I guess it's your style.
Well I don tknow it's your animation. =P. Again, the punch looked like a poke, and the jump... was a hop. If you going for that look, then Okay! But anyway,
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08-14-2008, 05:36 PM
very very very good
i like it! but its boring maybe if he was attaking sime 1 it was more iteresting

08-15-2008, 03:34 AM
yea, im still working on that, my reactions are very bad so u know, i cant really do it, but i think my combos are quite good

08-15-2008, 03:39 AM
Its good Rab, but the physics are a little off and its a bit stiff.