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Ssjbryando
08-13-2008, 05:06 PM
Inspired by ma man cicada (the first punch looks really like his, although I noticed that after O_o)

http://www.swfupload.com/view/127321.htm
altlink: http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=311097

Give some helpfull C&C please, or just good comments. (No, ''its bad real bad sorry'')
And I know its stiff (again)

Freddeh
08-13-2008, 05:10 PM
I really like it.
But you alrdy know that. :3

Ssjbryando
08-13-2008, 05:13 PM
Thanks <3

Sunder Forge
08-13-2008, 05:14 PM
It's bad, real bad sorry
:/



Really slow, the first punch made his arm stretch alot and look bad, the particles look bad if they're there for only one punhc which wasn't even that strong . The force in his punches was very different alot, sometimes it was just a gental knock back. other times it was an instant push that took 1 frame. THe final griound punch didn't even look strong enough to make that much of a shock-wave. Take out some of the frames.

Freddeh
08-13-2008, 05:17 PM
Lalk, tell him the truth. NAO!

Sunder Forge
08-13-2008, 05:21 PM
Lalk, tell him the truth. NAO!
I started typeing my actual C&? right after I made that comment.

Ssjbryando
08-13-2008, 05:21 PM
It's bad, real bad sorry
:/



Really slow, the first punch made his arm stretch alot and look bad, the particles look bad if they're there for only one punhc which wasn't even that strong . The force in his punches was very different alot, sometimes it was just a gental knock back. other times it was an instant push that took 1 frame. THe final griound punch didn't even look strong enough to make that much of a shock-wave. Take out some of the frames.


It goes fast on the swf actually D:. Ok I'll try and work on that.
Thanks

Drifts
08-13-2008, 05:31 PM
it was really good, i liked the anticipation too. It was really smooth.

Omega
08-13-2008, 09:32 PM
Just increase the fps, or remove a few easing frames. Too much easing makes it seem like those unnecessary pauses between movements.

Otherwise, it's pretty cool.

Reminds me of Cicada.

Freddeh
08-14-2008, 04:53 AM
He's pretty much inspired by Cicada/MetalFace/poopsicle331. :D

Tidus
08-14-2008, 05:04 AM
Wow! That was awesome! It's really smooth, and has a great style to it. The physics looked really weird, though.

En je bent Nederlands, toch :)?

-Hawk-
08-14-2008, 05:06 AM
That's pretty smooth, not to stiff, the final hit was pretty good. I liked it :)

Ssjbryando
08-14-2008, 05:40 AM
Thanks for your comments. Overeasing? Ok I will remove some more frames, or in a next test I will make the fight much faster. Now I got to work on my stiffness

And yes im dutch <:

Lixu
08-14-2008, 05:47 AM
Except the wall bounce everything was flawless, maybe add more easing to the bounce

Freddeh
08-14-2008, 05:56 AM
Lol, more easing? Pssh.

Ssjbryando
08-14-2008, 05:57 AM
I thought the wall bounce was actually more ''perfect'' then the rest. But I suck so I don't know =|

The easing there I think is enough lol, more easing would make it even slower

Freddeh
08-14-2008, 06:02 AM
You, young man. Don't suck.

Lixu
08-14-2008, 06:02 AM
I suck

QFT






































j/k, you dont suck, not at all

Freddeh
08-14-2008, 06:04 AM
QFT






































j/k

I lol'd...














Not.

Lixu
08-14-2008, 06:05 AM
I lol'd...














Not.

You made me slime mature man

Freddeh
08-14-2008, 06:09 AM
Back on topic. :]
So sorry for spamming your thread, SsjB.

I personally also like the wall bounce. It's really good.

Ssjbryando
08-14-2008, 06:09 AM
Ok shut up guys >______>


Although a page with a lot of replies does attract people. but ENOUGH IS ENOUGH (Ssjb Adds some drama to it)

Lixu
08-14-2008, 06:15 AM
Ok shut up guys >______>


Although a page with a lot of replies does attract people. but ENOUGH IS ENOUGH (Ssjb Adds some drama to it)

Oh come on we were just joking

Freddeh
08-14-2008, 06:30 AM
Then stop spamming.


Bryando, will you fix this one or will you let it be as it is?

Ssjbryando
08-14-2008, 07:03 AM
I'll see what I can do, delete some frames etc etc will probably make it a lot better. But I think I'm gonna start something new, the inhouse members of sl gave me some good tips, so im gonna try a stretchy stickfigure now (cause tht would help me with some stiffness)

Lixu
08-14-2008, 07:22 AM
Your tablet is working yet?