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Saha
08-16-2008, 04:41 AM
Finaly..My Inters attempt

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2552/theepicro9.gif

I also want to say this,I actually made a LONGER one that is just like this.It was confirmed inters..It was till 405 frames.I had been working on it till yesterday.1week in total.I've worked my life into this.Sadly,My devilish brother disturbed me when I was resizing a stick.He pressed all the buttons on the number pad and yeah...Hell was released.**** it hard.So I restarted my comp and went to the piv to continue.But,Invalid floating operation.Damn it guys.I HAVE PROOF.How do I fix it?

Credits to:
PowerFuse0
Rabstar
Edward0
DemiAngel
Justin
Baha
UltimateStickman

and everyone for making me who I am now.
Thank you everyone

Now...COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!

INTERS PLEASE
full C&C please

Strills
08-16-2008, 04:56 AM
Hey that's nice.

Effects needs some work on, but the rest is really nice.

Saha
08-16-2008, 05:26 AM
Um thanks for the comment!

Gyohdon
08-16-2008, 06:03 AM
Pretty bad...
The beginning looked awfull.. sorry
The beam was very off.
The guy getting up after the ball fell on him, was not right. It looked weird.
The 'trail'effect of the black guy wasn't quite right too.
And the shooting was bad.

And it's not borderline beginner, It's Borderline Intermediate.
And ranks are gay, appearently...

And if I had to rank, it'd be high beginner.
You still have a lot to work on to get with the big guys.

Saha
08-16-2008, 06:23 AM
.........damnit......I need more comments to confirm your statement

zawmbee
08-16-2008, 06:26 AM
it was just a random fest of poor effects, black out and random scenes.
Make a binding story, keep everything flowing, first it was a rouge ball, then some guy shooting, wtf?
The movements lacked fluidity, reactions were too stiff.
The shaking ball was awful, but it was a nice touch.
i see you put alot of effort into this, it shows, but you have alot to work on before you move up a rank.
Movements over effects.
I agree with gayohdon. :3
also borderline beginner isnt good at all, i think you mean borderline intermediate, which your not.

Gyohdon
08-16-2008, 06:38 AM
I agree with gayohdon. :3

I'd go all gayohdon for you =3


I need more comments to confirm your statement

You don't, you're just afraid of the truth.

And ranking yourself on a poll, higher than you are, isn't making you cool, but noobish.

Saha
08-16-2008, 07:06 AM
to be honest..I voted because I wanted to know who voted on high beg.Since of turning myself down.Why shouldn't I turn myself sunny side up?

Guess I'll have to keep trying..Haha....Now I'm getting started

Arch-Angel
08-16-2008, 09:03 AM
Upload the .piv and send it to me. I'll see if I can fix it.
(The one you said your brother messed up.)
I agree with ghydon, =/
Also, I cannot stress this enough. If you're going to use sub ranks, get them right.
Beginner:
Low
Med
High
Intermediate:
Low
Med
High
Veteran.

There aren't any, low med beginner, or anything containing 2 sub ranks in one rank. Nothing like that.

McR00ster
08-16-2008, 10:03 AM
the start seemed a bit dodge... but the rest was great! keep it up.

Phosphorus
08-16-2008, 02:01 PM
Upload the .piv and send it to me. I'll see if I can fix it.
(The one you said your brother messed up.)
I agree with ghydon, =/
Also, I cannot stress this enough. If you're going to use sub ranks, get them right.
Beginner:
Low
Med
High
Intermediate:
Low
Med
High
Veteran.

There aren't any, low med beginner, or anything containing 2 sub ranks in one rank. Nothing like that.

Sub ranks are stupid. It's just a way for noobs to feel good about themselves for being "med beginner".

Sherbet
08-16-2008, 04:31 PM
i loved it, low inters definately... and, where are my credz?, i helped you too o_O

Saha
08-16-2008, 10:07 PM
not exactly..I rather consider my self high beginner because most votes(Even pf0's vote)on the high beginner were experienced pivoters.So,yeah,I'ma go with high beginner...

Arch-Angel
08-16-2008, 10:09 PM
If you want to do a collaboration, I'l try to help you -_-

Upps
08-16-2008, 10:34 PM
you've improved alot, keep at it.

your easing style is decent and your movements are smooth.

but you still need to work on some choppy places. and go with bigger animations.