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falsehope
08-18-2008, 03:34 AM
Thks to droidz.org and creators of 'Electric Beam' & 'Xiao Xiao Background'.
Please comment and suggest things I can improve on.
*Took 1 day to edit original.
If you wish to view original, click Rabstar's URL just below this post

V1.25http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headlesshv6.gif
V1.5 http://img181.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headlessxt3.gif
V1.5(Screen Shot)
http://img264.imageshack.us/my.php?image=screenshotheadlesswk8.png
The red circle is edited in Paint. So it won't show up in the animation.

Rabstar
08-18-2008, 03:45 AM
http://img148.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headlessnv5.gif
ur welcome lol
um...nice beam, but well
there isnt much in it
try basics
like, walking, then running, then a jump, then punching, then kicking then a combo, thats what i did!
Rabstar

McR00ster
08-18-2008, 04:06 AM
beam was good, but you need colour.

falsehope
08-18-2008, 04:17 AM
Well, thanks for your suggestions and I plan to make what you suggested.

Improvements(May not come out):
-Colour for beam(Different colour for every frame?)
-Another StickMan enemy
-Punch & Kick Combo
-Guns?

Well do post your views!:Smile:

Bonk
08-18-2008, 04:20 AM
All it has going for it are .stks that aren't yours, such as the background and the beam. I guess look at tutorials, and watch some pros' stuff. Maybe even watch someone else running in real life and try to copy the movements.

But yeah, work on everything. And apparently you shouldn't use the default stk

falsehope
08-18-2008, 04:31 AM
Thanks, Bonk, for your review of my animation. Well I'll try to make a new background, but I can't really change the stickman...
I could make my own beam... but I sucks at it.

Anyway, thank you again.

McR00ster
08-18-2008, 05:37 AM
for the beam try and keep it one colour. if it's long then make it change every frame.

Saha
08-18-2008, 09:58 AM
Hmm hmm.Welcome to SPP hope.Since your at a early stage I suggest you should find a mentor.Do basic animations.Like for example:A ball dropping,Someone walking then running a punch a kick.

I think I could help you.Do you have msn?

falsehope
08-19-2008, 01:26 AM
Sry but I got no msn. I working on this animation currently...

willowdanny
08-19-2008, 04:55 AM
cool beam. If you extended that and had someone else running in and then they get blasted would be great. Really good =D

Dante556
08-21-2008, 09:41 PM
Practice makes perfect

๖ۣۜMomo22901
08-22-2008, 05:35 AM
very stiff ands needs easing, should post in begginer forums first b4 posting a thread

demi-god
08-22-2008, 07:53 AM
first anims are always nubby, meh just work on basics just check the tutorial sexun.

ElderKingpin
08-22-2008, 02:23 PM
try not to use the default stickman it has no backbone and its stiff as hell

ElderKingpin
08-22-2008, 02:24 PM
you can get another stickman at
droidz.org
i use future guard

.Busted
08-22-2008, 09:15 PM
you can get another stickman at
droidz.org
i use future guard
Yeh, because its SOOOO much better to use what someone else made.

krismobile
08-23-2008, 12:52 AM
work on easing and walking and force but apart from that for a first its prity good

ShadoFreze
08-23-2008, 11:15 AM
ya youll get better if you continue practicing