View Full Version : First Animation (May be nub but plz view)

08-18-2008, 03:34 AM
Thks to droidz.org and creators of 'Electric Beam' & 'Xiao Xiao Background'.
Please comment and suggest things I can improve on.
*Took 1 day to edit original.
If you wish to view original, click Rabstar's URL just below this post

V1.5 http://img181.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headlessxt3.gif
V1.5(Screen Shot)
The red circle is edited in Paint. So it won't show up in the animation.

08-18-2008, 03:45 AM
ur welcome lol
um...nice beam, but well
there isnt much in it
try basics
like, walking, then running, then a jump, then punching, then kicking then a combo, thats what i did!

08-18-2008, 04:06 AM
beam was good, but you need colour.

08-18-2008, 04:17 AM
Well, thanks for your suggestions and I plan to make what you suggested.

Improvements(May not come out):
-Colour for beam(Different colour for every frame?)
-Another StickMan enemy
-Punch & Kick Combo

Well do post your views!:Smile:

08-18-2008, 04:20 AM
All it has going for it are .stks that aren't yours, such as the background and the beam. I guess look at tutorials, and watch some pros' stuff. Maybe even watch someone else running in real life and try to copy the movements.

But yeah, work on everything. And apparently you shouldn't use the default stk

08-18-2008, 04:31 AM
Thanks, Bonk, for your review of my animation. Well I'll try to make a new background, but I can't really change the stickman...
I could make my own beam... but I sucks at it.

Anyway, thank you again.

08-18-2008, 05:37 AM
for the beam try and keep it one colour. if it's long then make it change every frame.

08-18-2008, 09:58 AM
Hmm hmm.Welcome to SPP hope.Since your at a early stage I suggest you should find a mentor.Do basic animations.Like for example:A ball dropping,Someone walking then running a punch a kick.

I think I could help you.Do you have msn?

08-19-2008, 01:26 AM
Sry but I got no msn. I working on this animation currently...

08-19-2008, 04:55 AM
cool beam. If you extended that and had someone else running in and then they get blasted would be great. Really good =D

08-21-2008, 09:41 PM
Practice makes perfect

08-22-2008, 05:35 AM
very stiff ands needs easing, should post in begginer forums first b4 posting a thread

08-22-2008, 07:53 AM
first anims are always nubby, meh just work on basics just check the tutorial sexun.

08-22-2008, 02:23 PM
try not to use the default stickman it has no backbone and its stiff as hell

08-22-2008, 02:24 PM
you can get another stickman at
i use future guard

08-22-2008, 09:15 PM
you can get another stickman at
i use future guard
Yeh, because its SOOOO much better to use what someone else made.

08-23-2008, 12:52 AM
work on easing and walking and force but apart from that for a first its prity good

08-23-2008, 11:15 AM
ya youll get better if you continue practicing