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tdopis
08-19-2008, 12:29 PM
well this is my second anim forget about the lightning towards the end i decided not to go with it cause it looked way to wierd i was gonna change it but i went on vacation so yeah

C&C plz http://www.swfme.com/view/1074072 or
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/vi....php?id=792342 (http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=792342)

Strills
08-19-2008, 12:38 PM
If that's your second animation ever, you're ****ing talented dude. It does have flaws on pretty much everything, but that's really good for a beginner!

I say don't care so much about effects before you got all the basics done well.

Frost
08-19-2008, 01:28 PM
heh, you finished it. its not bad. the lightning sucked, and everything happened a bit too fast, but thats really good for a second anim. but i cant belive you took out the dancing, though =[

Cizzil
08-19-2008, 03:58 PM
the particles around them was totally unnesisarry but the rest was good for a second anim