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Cizzil
08-22-2008, 10:20 PM
i ****ing suck, i cant produce anything good. Please give me c&c. I know it sucks, don't go easy on me i want to improve.
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=880614

Cory
08-22-2008, 10:26 PM
Practice makes perfect. No ones perfect. Do what you want.

Cizzil
08-22-2008, 10:29 PM
Do what i want? k maybe some actually feedback

Tork
08-23-2008, 04:11 AM
it was pretty good. i liked the beginning, exept for the end.. the smoothnes wass okay..
but... just, i donno. more action or something. nice try ;)
sure not the beginner section.. i think, if theres a flash beginners section

Knightsy
08-23-2008, 04:34 AM
more frames in between your movements will help at the moment thats what you seem to be lacking aswell as some well needed easing throw it all in, give it a blend and VOLAR.

Raffi
08-23-2008, 04:35 AM
He shouldn't just stick there at the end. The weight of his body would throw him foreward a little, unless he's a feather, lol.


Also, what Cory said.

willowdanny
08-23-2008, 02:18 PM
Adding on to what Raffeh and Cory said, when the left stick knocks the right stick over he seems to fall with no bends. He shouldn't fall straight down. Apart from that there is nothing wrong as the quality of the fighting is good.