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Motencu
08-24-2008, 01:49 AM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=774135

Etch
08-24-2008, 02:14 AM
Work on drawing your stick figures a bit smoother in each frame. Add some anticipation and just work on regular movements for now.

>_>

Tutorials buddy, tutorials.

Clips
08-24-2008, 05:50 AM
ah tutorials, wonderful things, look at one =)
dont send things that are too short BUT
anyways
work on your sticks, there ugly cuz they r wobbly, crooked and not smooth

Ssjbryando
08-24-2008, 06:51 AM
Very stiff. They both stood in a very stiff position, and the brown dude ended in one. You should continue to ease him and maybe pull his arms back, cause its unnatural to stay still in such a position. Also try to draw your legs a bit better, try to make them smoother.

And maybe add some detail to the line thing. =P

Motencu
09-02-2008, 07:55 PM
Wow I haven't read these comments...

Yeah I really need to work on my animations

tdopis
09-02-2008, 08:59 PM
the sticks are badly drawn try not to use many strokes for the body and the brown dude ended in a weird position just aint human make the arms go up or some thing you would do o and make your movements smoother

Motencu
09-02-2008, 09:00 PM
and may i see one of your animations? @.@

tdopis
09-02-2008, 09:06 PM
maybe on the weekend ill show it to you and for the heck of it ill do the same thing you did

Motencu
09-02-2008, 09:09 PM
must be better..