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CRAZY JAY
08-28-2008, 02:30 PM
Raizen Animation

http://www.stickpage.com/image/raizenlarge.jpg

http://www.stickpage.com/raizenplay.shtml

By: JAVARUSH214

Wtf
08-28-2008, 02:31 PM
Well deserved .
Great Job

.Aklemo.
08-28-2008, 02:32 PM
Awesome .

Lixu
08-28-2008, 02:49 PM
In before bin.
J/k j/k.
Pretty nice, I guess, just really weird storyline and ****ed up text show up.

Mesmay
08-28-2008, 04:17 PM
It was nice, Im glad you made such a long animation but I felt that the heads were very strange (with the tentacles) because even when theyd been KOd or killed the tentacles were still moving...
You can solve it by breaking the mc apart when the person is dead.
Apart from that it was nice for sure.

-Hawk-
08-28-2008, 04:24 PM
Javarush... you're on front page !!! Hahaha Raizen is really cool. It has the potential of a great series, but as mentioned before it needs more explanation of who Raizen is and why everything is happening since you actually tried to add more detail. Story details come with visual details ^_^. You should make an explanatory episode when you have time. That episode should be like a... story in images (have you seen Castle Prologue?) just to explain the fans what the story is all about. :) I really liked Raizen, can't wait for 2nd episode.

Omega
08-28-2008, 05:33 PM
Hey, you finally made front page!

Good job. Movements could have been more fluid, and the text could be fixed up, but it's pretty cool. You've improved a lot since I last saw you.

Good work buddy.

javarush214
08-28-2008, 10:01 PM
It was nice, Im glad you made such a long animation but I felt that the heads were very strange (with the tentacles) because even when theyd been KOd or killed the tentacles were still moving...
You can solve it by breaking the mc apart when the person is dead.
Apart from that it was nice for sure.

HOLY F**K your right man! damn.. i didnt think of that.. hahaha


thanks for the comments guys i appreciate it ^^

fitzy
08-29-2008, 06:07 AM
good job dude i enjoyed that...even though the storyline sorta seemed like it was brought in at the last second. (i dont hold it against you, i do that all the time :p).

shadowxiao
08-30-2008, 03:59 PM
Very nice Javarush (formally known as "Rebelion214"). I knew that you'd get front page some day XD

Motencu
09-01-2008, 12:09 PM
Really Nice :3 smooth and awesome!

Nikiyolstik
09-02-2008, 06:05 PM
It's shit.

......

NTG
09-02-2008, 07:04 PM
ggaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy

Raffi
09-03-2008, 04:35 AM
I enjoyed it. Don't know why people think it sucks.

Flashorama
09-03-2008, 08:13 AM
It was very well done. A little stiff at some parts and sometimes forgot some movements but still very awesome.

Nikiyolstik
09-03-2008, 03:09 PM
I enjoyed it. Don't know why people think it sucks.

because the sfx are from another environment. (metaphor)

mindcontrol
09-04-2008, 10:11 AM
i thought it was sweet, and i can't wait tell 2!!! so quit messin' with him :P

Raffi
09-09-2008, 11:39 AM
WAIT WHY DID YOU CREDIT ITACHIDJ FOR THE MENU THAT I MADE?!

javarush214
09-09-2008, 07:52 PM
WAIT WHY DID YOU CREDIT ITACHIDJ FOR THE MENU THAT I MADE?!

he made a menu for me in raizen too.. but i wasnt able to use it.. anyhow your name was still in the menu right? everybody will know you still made it

Raffi
09-10-2008, 02:11 AM
Ohhh I get it. lol :3

DragonDiva
10-01-2008, 08:28 AM
Yet another awsome animation Javarush214. The rude finger close up made me lol. Please hurry in finishing the sequel. Oh and congrats on making the first page. I knew you had the skills ever since you joined!

Zsdery
10-09-2008, 04:53 PM
it was just to awesome
(LoLzZ he flippeded hims offfz!!!)

Gavel
10-09-2008, 08:18 PM
Why was this animation named after a dehydrated grape?

Bonk
10-10-2008, 01:37 AM
That would be Raisin, silly. GAWD.

Gavel
10-10-2008, 03:37 PM
That would be Raisin, silly. GAWD.
Either way, if he was telling his friends about his new animation, I'm sure there would be discrepancies.

"hey guys wanna check out my sick new anim???"
"yeah nigga what you call it?"
"raizen, yo"
"oh i had some-a those in my bagel this mornin"

Zsdery
10-10-2008, 04:24 PM
can i have those sounds for some reason flash kit doesn't have them!!!!

javarush214
10-13-2008, 09:53 PM
eh acctually i got the name raizen from yuyu hakusho