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soulwave
09-08-2008, 03:40 PM
here are my tests i think they ok but i wanna see your opinion:)

blood test-http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=71284

jump test-http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=569344

kick test-http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=950107

punch test 1-http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=460551

punch test 2-http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=530116

running test-http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=26687

walking test(my fav)-http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=676137

what you think?

Ssjbryando
09-08-2008, 03:44 PM
Please put spaces between ''-'' and the link. Then its actually clickable.

EG: >_>

blood test- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=71284

Sorry, im to tired to C&C right now. This is probably my first post where I wasn't saying one thing about the animation itself =|

Tommorrow I will.

BluGil
09-08-2008, 04:10 PM
punch (first) probably your best.
blood was ok
walking and running and jumping dont look right... the legs on the walk were pretty good though. work on general stuff, just practice a lot.

Motencu
09-08-2008, 05:36 PM
blood test- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=71284

jump test- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=569344

kick test- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=950107

punch test 1- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=460551

punch test 2- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=530116

running test- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=26687

walking test(my fav)- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=676137

soulwave
09-08-2008, 05:55 PM
thnxs tasku:) so guys what do you think is my best?

Cizzil
09-08-2008, 07:24 PM
I am guessing you just basically did exactly what some tutorial told you to do. Don't be afraid to change it up if you don't think it looks like how you want it. Create your own style. Try to take out the stiffness. And on the jump, he won't stay in the same position the entire time he is in the air.

Strills
09-09-2008, 12:45 AM
Umm. Both the punches are okay. The blood is okay, but you applied it wrong to one of the punches. It's missing some force.

Keep reading tutorials, I can see you allready are.

soulwave
09-09-2008, 02:19 AM
punch 1 i got from tuts,2nd punch was all me and the blood was me too. thnxs for your opinions guys ill work on the make them more stylish

Bonk
09-09-2008, 04:04 AM
I get the feeling that you know how flash works, and you know all the required features good animations have. All you need now is practice.

RawGreen
09-09-2008, 10:19 PM
the second punch test was the nicest one, unlike the other unease, physic less, stiff ones....your animations are really smooth though, no wobbling here.

M3D
09-10-2008, 05:23 AM
Work on easing and physics the most.

Slayer
09-10-2008, 05:47 AM
The blood was actually pretty nice, good job.

The jump was pretty choppy, you need to add more frames in there, and while he's in mid air, you should still have him moving. When you jump, you don't completely freeze. You have the physics/easing down pretty decently though.

On the kick, you need to have him preload his kick, like make him pull his foot back, hold it there for a few frames, then make him unleash the kick quickly. This makes it look real, like he's putting a lot of force into his kick.

Punch 1 was ok, but the person getting punched should rotate more as he falls down, and maybe not fly as much through the air. You did pretty good when he stepped into the punch, but when he's following through, his torso and head should drop a bit, then come back up to emphasize the strength of the punch.

Punch 2 wasn't good at all. The punch was way too quick, and the person getting hit reacted like from his back down was concrete or rooted to the ground.

The run was pretty good, but when he runs, his spine should bend a bit for the part where he pushes off the ground to show he's actually pushing off of it. The head was ok too, but a little bit rushed it seemed. You want to do that same thing, but maybe for a few more frames so it looks better.

On the walk, when he plants his front foot on the ground, it should straighten out more, to balance him. The back arm needs to swing out behind him just a little more aswell.

You're an ok animator overall, keep practicing. What fps setting was that by the way?

dawG
09-10-2008, 09:00 AM
It's stiff and needs really much easing.
But just keep it up, you'll get better.

Bai

soulwave
09-12-2008, 06:44 AM
i think it was 18fps ovall i see what you meen by stiffness i think the best one there is my walk 2 smoothest i think thnxs for your opinion