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Cizzil
09-15-2008, 09:37 PM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=715032

please comment want to improve.


with head and kick
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=698382

Omega
09-15-2008, 10:24 PM
I think the legs resize?
Anyway, draw the limbs better and add a bit more easing.

Keep on practicing. :)

Cizzil
09-16-2008, 06:56 AM
yeah it does resize some, here it is with head and extra kick.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=698382

M3D
09-16-2008, 07:10 AM
Its shaky and the easing is just not in your dictionary.
Focus on that.
Make it look more fluid.

Request
09-16-2008, 07:19 AM
fix up your run cycle, add more easing before and after the jump, and redraw the frames during the flip don't just move the symbol, also the kick, the guy needs to bend down a little more the ease him up with the kick.


Draw better backgrounds aswell.