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Tawnik
09-20-2008, 10:56 AM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=592316

Took me about 2 hours
24 FPS
Character for my upcoming animations

C&c please

Sunder Forge
09-20-2008, 11:08 AM
You Just inspired me to work on my movie.
Twas great.

Killcycle
09-20-2008, 11:32 AM
I like how the tie sways

dawG
09-20-2008, 11:33 AM
Very nice.
2 hours sounds like alot of time, but it came out great though.

Lixu
09-20-2008, 12:52 PM
Haha, awesome details!

Tawnik
09-20-2008, 12:58 PM
Very nice.
2 hours sounds like alot of time, but it came out great though.

I was bored,Maybe it was only 1 and half hour,idk now :D

Thank you guys,I shouldn't say,but there are some bad things,For example his left arm or the hat is resizing :| still,I like it :D

Cizzil
09-20-2008, 05:52 PM
nice with the tie sway and everything.

Tawnik
09-21-2008, 03:00 AM
Thank you,someone on SLs said the tie lags :| I dont see it,but,meh :D

Drifts
09-21-2008, 11:31 AM
I like how the tie sways

I second that! Awesome detail.

-Hawk-
09-21-2008, 11:32 AM
That was great, man, really smooth.

New Generation
09-21-2008, 11:35 AM
Put more easing into the arm and the body over all. It kind of looks half-smooth now but it's good.

Mr.Pancake
09-21-2008, 01:18 PM
His dick dissapeared :O

Drifts
09-21-2008, 01:35 PM
lmao!Why are you watching that, plus it just gets smaller :D

Tawnik
09-21-2008, 02:13 PM
Yeah,some parts kinda resizes :D

Index
09-21-2008, 02:17 PM
His dick dissapeared :O

Yeah, I noticed that.

M3D
09-21-2008, 02:22 PM
Thank you guys,I shouldn't say,but there are some bad things,For example his left arm or the hat is resizing :| still,I like it :D

His dik also dissapears :-|
Still, I like it :-D

Edit, damn someone said it already :|

Mesmay
09-21-2008, 02:24 PM
i swear i saw pants o_o

supranova
09-21-2008, 07:18 PM
Really nice, cant wait to see more.

Tawnik
09-22-2008, 03:19 AM
i swear i saw pants o_o

You saw belt :|

Mr.Pancake
09-22-2008, 03:26 AM
ok now for some real crit:


try and make the arm swing less stiff, you know kinda bendy like this:

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/uploads/546865swingood.jpg

Tawnik
09-22-2008, 06:10 AM
I don't get it,can you do short stick animation please,thank you :)