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Saha
09-25-2008, 05:25 AM
http://www.swfme.com/view/1183802

http://www.swfme.com/view/1232912
They are tests involving particles.

C&C please

Clips
09-25-2008, 05:34 AM
only liked the first one
the spin was ok but could be better
second was too short

supranova
09-25-2008, 05:55 AM
Not too bad, work on adding more particles, as well as randomize how fast the particles dissappear for a better effect.

Saha
09-25-2008, 06:40 AM
Thanks for the c&c.

You mean let the particles last a bit longer?

Rabstar
09-25-2008, 07:19 AM
the particles shud have dissolved more fluidly...and here shudve been more!
it was good, but could've been improved...
2nd one, tbh...yuck...lol

RawGreen
09-25-2008, 07:47 AM
2nd one yuck indeedie, yup, yuck.... lol

Saha
09-25-2008, 08:24 AM
Instead of telling me "EEEEEK" or "YUCKIE YUCK YUCK!1"

Why don't you tell me what was wrong with it?

M3D
09-25-2008, 11:39 AM
Don't worry about them thier shit.

What you need to do, and im talking about stickmen, is take more time on them.
Don't be afraid of making thier legs open more or have thier back bend more.
Basically they are stiff and needs more flexibility.
Watch some fights on youtube and stuff and watch thier body movements.

Also try harder to fix the shakyness.