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New Generation
09-25-2008, 12:25 PM
http://fwup.net/view/yth94qiwyr

This is for my coursework: Animation Unit 20.

Besides I only had like an hour on this.

If I show this to my class. They will go... you know. They don't know nothing about animation :]

zawmbee
09-25-2008, 12:29 PM
Inspiration :D
I'm doing this too, but not flash.
Good work.

New Generation
09-25-2008, 12:34 PM
Thanks! =D .

Deathbat.
09-25-2008, 12:51 PM
Faggot .

LordDragona
09-25-2008, 01:11 PM
I agree, this is pretty gay. If you're going through shit in life, and you **** up and kill someone, you should just kill yourself. Who's honestly going to sit in jail for the rest of their life?

The animation would only have taken me like, 5-10 minutes, so Idk, hah on your part. lol.

Lixu
09-25-2008, 01:12 PM
Faggot .


I agree, this is pretty gay. If you're going through shit in life, and you **** up and kill someone, you should just kill yourself. Who's honestly going to sit in jail for the rest of their life?

The animation would only have taken me like, 5-10 minutes, so Idk, hah on your part. lol.

QFT .

New Generation
09-25-2008, 01:51 PM
Well done guys for being total idiots except LordDragona who actually explained it but I still don't agree with him.

This is just an advert guys, not some professional advert that will go on to the display or get advertised, it's there to show animation skill.

Paintball: GTFO because you didn't even comment on the animation. Spammer.

Deathwish
09-25-2008, 01:55 PM
If that's you then you look like a little chavvy faggot.

I didn't even watch it after I saw the first picture.

zawmbee
09-25-2008, 02:17 PM
If that's you then you look like a little chavvy faggot.

I didn't even watch it after I saw the first picture.
You should have, and it was probably off the net.http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w311/Newgroundsbuddy/winklagh.png

New Generation
09-26-2008, 04:20 AM
You should have, and it was probably off the net.http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w311/Newgroundsbuddy/winklagh.png

Yes it was off the internet. And you are one little angry mod! LOL

Clips
09-26-2008, 04:20 AM
how is it there to show animation skill if theres no animation, only words flying across the screen slowly and pictures,
its more like a slideshow done with windows mov maker

Spitzer
09-26-2008, 11:56 AM
Animation "Skill"?

All I saw were fade outs, choppy tweens, and shitty blur effects.

After seeing this; i dont think you deserve to be telling anyone the Gtfo.

Faggot.

Mesmay
09-26-2008, 12:35 PM
You should have, and it was probably off the net.http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w311/Newgroundsbuddy/winklagh.png

hey, where did the sexy new smiley come from?


Regarding the "animation". You say its to show off animation skill. But... I swear that only two pieces in the entire thing were animated, and the rest were just tweens ._.


And frankly, what WAS animated wasnt very good. Try for when you do blood spletters for it all to happen a lot faster, in fewer frames. It shouldnt be so slow. (and imo the blood should be darker and without such a harsh, obvious bevel)


And also, NEVER USE COMIC SANS O_O because its so overused that the moment I see the message just becomes completely irrelevant. Plus the seriousness of the message youre trying to convey is killed by the comicality of the font(s).


I hope you bother to read this, and instead of trying to put you down Im trying to give you constructive advice.