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Mesmay
09-29-2008, 01:01 PM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=356219

Working on effects, and fb, that kinda stuff...

(and i havent finished with the bgs just yet, so dont comment on them unless you feel you must =P)

C&C would be great, thanks

M3D
09-29-2008, 01:10 PM
The effects were nice. Well some of them.
I hated the fullbody and drawings.

I liked the Bg in the first part.

Strills
09-29-2008, 01:10 PM
As I said on msn it's cool, but sometimes it's slowwwww.

Mesmay
09-29-2008, 01:13 PM
The effects were nice. Well some of them.
I hated the fullbody and drawings.

I liked the Bg in the first part.


hate is a strong word ;_;
do explain why, please...

Lixu
09-29-2008, 01:18 PM
What is your MSN? And why are those effects so awesome? And why is your fullbody so nicely coloured?

Ssjbryando
09-29-2008, 01:20 PM
I love it all to be honest with ya. Its great, I love the effects/angles/bg/characters. =3

M3D
09-29-2008, 01:29 PM
hate is a strong word ;_;
do explain why, please...

Hate IS a strong word. What i meant was dislike.
I don't kow if its the style i dislike or the way you drawn it.
But it looks a bit weird IMO.

Anyway, others may think differently.
As i said i like the rest.

Tawnik
09-29-2008, 01:58 PM
The sky is amazing,looks great and those effects were awesome.

But I don't like some of the sounds you used,It would be better with some good music :)

Still amazing animation :D

kinto
09-29-2008, 03:10 PM
I think I see what M3D is getting at. The fullbody drawings were not pretty enough to be FB...it was more like a filled out stick.

LordDragona
09-29-2008, 03:18 PM
Mesmay, you should pm me your msn =3
I thought it was well animated for what it is. If you feel like it or have the free time, you should right click the FB's and click smooth. It might make it look a bit better.

kinto
09-29-2008, 03:20 PM
Loved the effects though.

Opted
09-29-2008, 03:39 PM
That's real nice.

The hand position seems kind of weird to me.
(shouldn't it be flipped around?)

Anyways, it had some really good effects. I hope you don't
substitute scene changes and effects for actual animation though.

Omega
09-29-2008, 04:41 PM
Holy shit, nice effects man.

As for the animation of the actual figure, there wasn't much to comment on.
Nice backgrounds and nice choice of colours too.

You might wanna die down on the filters a little bit? Looks awesome, but my computer sucks and melted during your animation :(

Good work.

Tawnik
09-30-2008, 04:54 AM
Mesmay, you should pm me your msn =3
I thought it was well animated for what it is. If you feel like it or have the free time, you should right click the FB's and click smooth. It might make it look a bit better.

I think Mesmay and many others (me too) like the way it is drawn now,the non-smooth version,imo.

And no one has admitted the great sky effect yet,I think it was pwnsome !!!

Rabstar
09-30-2008, 05:54 AM
WHOA!!!
AWSOME!!!!
nice effects, love 'em!

Mesmay
09-30-2008, 10:05 AM
Ok, thanks for the comments everyone, im glad you liked the effects <3

Although about the actual figures-
Im redoing the shadow guy, and probably also the other one, trying to make them look a bit more impressive, because the feeling im getting is that if they were better it would boost the whole animation tenfold.

thanks again

Lixu
09-30-2008, 10:17 AM
Msn, Must, Share, Now, Becus, Yahoo, Is, Slow

RawGreen
09-30-2008, 11:32 AM
Msn, Must, Share, Now, Becus, Yahoo, Is, Slow

wow..... nice comment.....


anyways I loved all of it, all it needs to be perfect is some movement and effect sketchiness. All's good here :)

Drifts
09-30-2008, 12:47 PM
That's my son, Mesmay :D
lol joking.

Ok am gonna be harsh just coz ur an awesome animator.

There wasnt much full body movements, besides the hand going up. The background was increadible i must admit. Also effects were great especially with sounds. Just work on making more movement, but in this case i'll let it slide.

.Busted
09-30-2008, 06:36 PM
That's my son, Mesmay :D
lol joking.

Ok am gonna be harsh just coz ur an awesome animator.

There wasnt much full body movements, besides the hand going up. The background was increadible i must admit. Also effects were great especially with sounds. Just work on making more movement, but in this case i'll let it slide.
I agree, but I still think it was sick.


Keep it up, I hope I can get that good, I do Fb, too.

Lixu
10-01-2008, 07:55 AM
wow..... nice comment.....


anyways I loved all of it, all it needs to be perfect is some movement and effect sketchiness. All's good here :)

You are saying you give good critics?

Ssjbryando
10-01-2008, 08:09 AM
You are saying you give good critics?

He at least says something about the animation instead of asking for someones msn twice in an animation thread.

(Just pm him >_>)

And sorry for this off topic post. (I at least apologize)

Lixu
10-01-2008, 08:10 AM
He at least says something about the animation instead of asking for someones msn twice in an animation thread.

(Just pm him >_>)

And sorry for this off topic post. (I at least apologize)

I SAID IT WAS AWESOME, AWESOME ANIMATIONS DONT HAVE BAD SIDES IN MY EYES.

You really piss me off, read ALL my posts before you think I am unhelpfull

Bonk
10-01-2008, 08:27 PM
I SAID IT WAS AWESOME, AWESOME ANIMATIONS DONT HAVE BAD SIDES IN MY EYES.

You really piss me off, read ALL my posts before you think I am unhelpfull

Dude, chill out. You seem to always accelerate disagreements to the flaming stage.

Anyway, the animation: The angles, effects, and sky was cool. But when you look at it, in each different angle the characters are just in a pose. The only real movement was the hand at the start.

kinto
10-01-2008, 08:37 PM
SHUT THE **** UP BONK I'M GOING TO RAPE YOU IN THIS COMPETITION


PREPARE TO GET SCRAPED SCRUB


































ololololol

Bonk
10-01-2008, 09:06 PM
In your dreeams bro.

Drifts
10-02-2008, 05:11 AM
lol!! but everyone knows that my entry will be the best :D

Motencu
10-02-2008, 07:01 AM
Nice animation, except for the outline of the fb. So are you making a fb for KSBG?

Ssjbryando
10-02-2008, 07:11 AM
lol!! but everyone knows that my entry will be the best :D

lolo : D this is what I was talking about on msn.


YEA CHILL OUT GUYS.

Mesmay
10-02-2008, 10:14 AM
;_;
if this thread turns into a fight ill just delete it =/

Although I doubt it will. (*optimism*)

and yeah Ill use fb for ksbg, probably, meaning my chance of winning have dimished quite a lot lol

and paintball you already know it- i just dont use it very often any more.

Sunder Forge
10-02-2008, 04:40 PM
I'm gonna be one of the odd ones out again.
I didn't like it.
It:
- had minimal movements
- had a nice cloud Bg, the ground was awful
- Was too jagged for my taste
- Had those filterd blasts that only smashed the earth and had no particles.
- Was kinda boring


Good angles tho...
:/

Motencu
10-02-2008, 04:57 PM
;_;
if this thread turns into a fight ill just delete it =/

Although I doubt it will. (*optimism*)

and yeah Ill use fb for ksbg, probably, meaning my chance of winning have dimished quite a lot lol

and paintball you already know it- i just dont use it very often any more.
That would be cool. I got three entries already and two of them are fb.

killerpenguin
10-11-2008, 08:08 AM
the last blast and bg was amazing but all in all it was cool ^.^