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Mesmay
10-07-2008, 02:33 PM
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/463557

Obviously you dont have to vote 5(or 10), but think of all the nice things Ive done for you.
Like swear at you.
And chuck you out of my collabs.


Also, all your comments are appreciated.
My first fb submission to newgrounds =D

kinto
10-07-2008, 02:58 PM
Wow it looks really cool.

Mesmay
10-07-2008, 02:59 PM
thank you a lot O.O
Ive been worried people wouldnt like it.

<3

Vincent
10-07-2008, 03:01 PM
That was pretty cool, reminded me of salad fingers, sorta...

Sunder Forge
10-07-2008, 03:11 PM
I liked the style, but honestly, that was ****ing boring, nothing happened, I know it was an opening to the rest of it (if it's for te mania), and you tried to explain it, but come on ?! The robots didn't look awsome enough, nothing really did anything......
5/10

Mr potato head
10-07-2008, 05:32 PM
i agree with sunder.
it was great art but nothing really happend

M3D
10-07-2008, 05:39 PM
I like the whole bloody thing.
I watched it three times.

Very unique.

Mesmay, im liking your stuff more and more.

Strife
10-07-2008, 06:44 PM
I love it dude.

But in all honesty it could be so much better, art wise.

Smooth out the strokes, make the size a little smaller, and just spend a little more time, still really good.

looking forward to second one.

supranova
10-07-2008, 07:23 PM
Wow, very unique, well animated, and to me the art seemed to match the tone of the whole movie.

Great job.

kinto
10-07-2008, 08:04 PM
Well honestly if you just turned the smoothening up over the whole animation it would look a little better, though the longer better way would be to zoom in and draw...though I thought it was cool. A non-violent animation is cool sometimes, so great job. It's hard to animate non-violence so good job with that.

Bonk
10-08-2008, 01:06 AM
I am... disappointed.


That more people don't make movies like this. The art was a bit sloppy, and I expected something a bit more epic, but the plot was much better than most of the stuff around. As in, it had one.

I like it, but from looking at you sig and predicting an epic tale, I am a bit disappointed. But good work regardless.

Mesmay
10-08-2008, 01:40 AM
That was pretty cool, reminded me of salad fingers, sorta...

lol, thanks =3


I liked the style, but honestly, that was ****ing boring, nothing happened, I know it was an opening to the rest of it (if it's for te mania), and you tried to explain it, but come on ?! The robots didn't look awsome enough, nothing really did anything......
5/10

Ok..
Thanks. Im confused personally why some found it boring and others didnt... but ok thanks, I will attempt to make the robots cooler on the second one.
(and btw its not for the mania, it has nothing to do with the mania)
<3


i agree with sunder.
it was great art but nothing really happend

ok thanks


I like the whole bloody thing.
I watched it three times.

Very unique.

Mesmay, im liking your stuff more and more.

yey


I love it dude.

But in all honesty it could be so much better, art wise.

Smooth out the strokes, make the size a little smaller, and just spend a little more time, still really good.

looking forward to second one.

Thanks, I know the arts a big problem now, Im gonna have to improve it for my next anim


Wow, very unique, well animated, and to me the art seemed to match the tone of the whole movie.

Great job.

thanks =3


Well honestly if you just turned the smoothening up over the whole animation it would look a little better, though the longer better way would be to zoom in and draw...though I thought it was cool. A non-violent animation is cool sometimes, so great job. It's hard to animate non-violence so good job with that.

the art is a problem, i know i know =D
again, itll be better for the second, hopefully.

I am... disappointed.


That more people don't make movies like this. The art was a bit sloppy, and I expected something a bit more epic, but the plot was much better than most of the stuff around. As in, it had one.

I like it, but from looking at you sig and predicting an epic tale, I am a bit disappointed. But good work regardless.

Ok <3 there wasnt actually much of an epic storyline behind it, it was supposed to be a slightly un-normal day for them, if you know what I mean.




So yeah, Im going to try and improve the artwork, make a more dynamic storyline, and just touch up on a couple other areas IF I make a second.
And ONE of these days I WILL impress you Sunder Force. >:3

One day.


Oh yeah and this got Daily Second <3 yey (3.99)

dawG
10-08-2008, 05:19 AM
I really liked it, very good.

Strills
10-08-2008, 06:27 AM
Very cool. Thanks for the creds <3

I already said I'm not really into this stuff, but I still really like it. It's cute or something.

Looking forward to 2 :3

and yeah, you should higher the smoothing.

Gyohdon
10-08-2008, 10:53 AM
whew, I love this one

I was just dissapointed by the shortness.

Im going to be looking forward to seeds 2
Srs

RawGreen
10-08-2008, 11:24 AM
If this is your newest creation, I'd hate to see your other ones.
And if you have a second one, I'll pass out cigars...
and cheat on you with your wife...

nice job on this. It is boring, but I like boring. Boring sets a relaxed tone.....being relaxed is being boring. But being relaxed without being bored takes skill.....unless you're high. And if you're high and your still going to be bored, then I don't recommended this "highly relaxed, boring" film. But I'm a relaxed person and I'm high, and I was bored of being bored until I saw this "Highly relaxed, boring" animation. Now I'm wishing some torrents would get seeds so I could download them.

nice animation, I plan to get as high as you are....but I'm still going to cheat on you with your wife...

Mesmay
10-08-2008, 12:13 PM
If this is your newest creation, I'd hate to see your other ones.
And if you have a second one, I'll pass out cigars...
and cheat on you with your wife...

nice job on this. It is boring, but I like boring. Boring sets a relaxed tone.....being relaxed is being boring. But being relaxed without being bored takes skill.....unless you're high. And if you're high and your still going to be bored, then I don't recommended this "highly relaxed, boring" film. But I'm a relaxed person and I'm high, and I was bored of being bored until I saw this "Highly relaxed, boring" animation. Now I'm wishing some torrents would get seeds so I could download them.

nice animation, I plan to get as high as you are....but I'm still going to cheat on you with your wife...

Erm.



Im not going to pretend, I have no idea what ANY of that meant. o.o
But I got the impression you liked the anim overall?
Thanks, I think

RawGreen
10-08-2008, 01:37 PM
Erm.



Im not going to pretend, I have no idea what ANY of that meant. o.o
But I got the impression you liked the anim overall?
Thanks, I think

Erm like sperm man, I love it.

Ssjbryando
10-09-2008, 09:15 AM
Nice score lol, Ng loves that shizzles :3

<3 Im one of the 4 people in the begin creditz, fo' sure.

I liked it a lot, something new once in a while is good. :D NICE NICE. It wasn't as boring as Sunder forge said it was, of course it wasn't fighting but it wasn't that long either nor was it =| that boring, it entertaining :D

And boring mostly isn't good =| You can be relaxed without being bored lol.

Mesmay
10-09-2008, 10:38 AM
Thank you <3

Squelch
10-09-2008, 01:24 PM
I loved it. I didn't think it was boring at all, this type of animation is meant to tell a story, not to be filled with mindless fighting. I can't wait until number 2.

Wtf
10-09-2008, 01:58 PM
Oh my it's great.
I must say, I ignored this thread because I thought it was another boring and no sound animation like the most here have.

BTW I'm kinda a newbie at NG. How can I see the Daily Top?

Mesmay
10-09-2008, 02:04 PM
Thank you squelch


@ Canvas- Go here- http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/forum/8

Theres a thread there for every day containing the top 10, and obviously one is posted every day.

And thanks for the comment btw

Wtf
10-09-2008, 02:07 PM
wow thanks .