View Full Version : Pretty much random, but meh

10-12-2008, 06:16 AM
C&C please! Randomness (http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=177975)

10-12-2008, 06:19 AM
The rock sound effect was really well done, as was the suddeness of the breakout.

But it needs a lot of work. There wasn't that much continuous movement, so I'd say work on getting some fluidity in that before trying to do effects.

Also, NEVER use that first sound effect ever again unless it is REALLY relevant.

10-12-2008, 07:58 AM
Thanks, do you know any good sound packs? (except Xiao, brawl and fighting)

10-12-2008, 11:30 AM
It's the happiest place on earth.

The animation wasn't all too great, but I think the sounds and effects covered that up somewhat, which is odd lol. Good frosting, but the cake sucks?
Work on stick construction and draw out every limb and joint for your sticks. For example, don't just make one curved line for the arms, draw out the bicep as one line, then the forearm. Working on this will help your sticks be more consistant and orgasmic for one's eyes.