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Cizzil
10-15-2008, 08:42 PM
I made this in class the other day, but rushed the ending since class was about to end, so yeah i know the ending sucks

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=589917

cc please

EDIT: also, i had fixed it, but idk wut happened, the head disapears for a second.

Request
10-15-2008, 08:44 PM
Work on the movements, easing, blood and effects from the gun shot.

supranova
10-15-2008, 09:11 PM
The movements seemed jerky and unnartural. Plus there was one frame where his torso was missing.

Cizzil
10-15-2008, 09:21 PM
i looked through it and the torso doesn't disapear, but i agree its jerky