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Lixu
10-16-2008, 09:47 AM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=307651&lb=y

Blast3r
10-16-2008, 09:51 AM
First few movements were great, the last few looked kinda choppy.
Oh, and you've messed up the vcam a bit I think.

Hackor Pickel
10-16-2008, 09:51 AM
wow you've gotten awsome since last time i saw u :D

Lixu
10-16-2008, 09:52 AM
Don't think so, but thanks!

HOLY SHIT, quick reply!

EDIT: Thanks hackor, I told u all i improved

Hackor Pickel
10-16-2008, 09:56 AM
well i've been on different forums and stuff, i do more games now than i do animating :D

Rabstar
10-16-2008, 10:04 AM
Oh Snap!
Awsome man!
PB, ur improving sooo much!
Good on ya!

Lixu
10-16-2008, 10:10 AM
Thanks WabStaw

Gyohdon
10-16-2008, 10:38 AM
The trail of the red one when he was hit, was weird. The following drop on the ground looked uneased. And the whole animation needed to be sped up. What FPS is this?

And this isn't FB, buddy.
If you say you animate fullbody, do so.
Bad boy....

Rabstar
10-16-2008, 10:52 AM
Lol, Wabstaw!

Then it is....Paaiwntbawl
lol.

Lixu
10-16-2008, 10:55 AM
And this isn't FB, buddy.
If you say you animate fullbody, do so.
Bad boy....

Aw do you bother so much? FPS is 20

fuppy
10-16-2008, 02:55 PM
Actually pretty decent.
Still stiff, and your figures seemed to be stretched out wide-ways.
But not bad.

RawGreen
10-16-2008, 03:08 PM
And this isn't FB, buddy.
If you say you animate fullbody, do so.
Bad boy....

go fuck with a dead chicken.

I think what you need to do is make the v-cam eased when its moving back and forth.
the last fall was uneased

of the things that annoys me personally; would be frame 74: there's no head in the guys trail path, and hit on the green guy with those lines

and I do agree that when he was hit that the trails where a bit strange(I would've made a line like the others, but have a radial fill, not a linear fill).

frame 59: when the green guy comes up and kicks him, the trail makes it seem unbalanced(I'm taking it that the v-cam has to do with it too). I'd go for multiple blurs up the back of greens body to show a thrust forward.

on frame 25: his head looks detached from the body.

frames 67-74: the fact that his leg pops into a position so fast, nothing is wrong with that. it's just the fact that some of the trails....well....the trails go over the body, if anything, they should somewhat transparent or be behind the real body. it's a slight distraction.
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You may think allot of the things I said are bull, but these are just simple things that are put here so that you can learn more for the next animation you make. I'm very happy to see you post an animation again, and I can't wait to see more from you. You have improved greatly, good luck and nice job!

frames 80-90: I loved this part personally

Eased tweening: http://anipedia.thebackalleys.com/index.php/Tutorial:Motion_tweening

Lixu
10-17-2008, 02:08 AM
Holy shit thanks for the great criticism! I do know how to make eased tweening but Im lazy with just tests or w/e. And what the ****? Your the first person here on SPP talking about frame NUMBERS instead of scene's: Awesome!

Blast3r
10-17-2008, 05:27 AM
Tweening? Lol, tweening sucks.

Lixu
10-17-2008, 11:00 AM
I always tween my cams so it doesnt look shaky :P

Blast3r
10-17-2008, 12:03 PM
I always tween my cams so it doesnt look shaky :P

Ah, thought he was talking about tweening animations.

Gyohdon
10-17-2008, 02:01 PM
Seriously, rawgreen and paintball, ****you.
Never heard of any ****ing sarcasm?
Pieces of shit.

RawGreen
10-17-2008, 02:43 PM
Seriously, rawgreen and paintball, ****you.
Never heard of any ****ing sarcasm?
Pieces of shit.

no, like I ever heard of sarcasm. Now jump that cliff over there *sarcastic*

@PaintBall - oh shit! this was just a test? JUST A TEST? I better get practicing, you're passing me up, and I still was never as good as you. O_o

lol, in a few days, it'll be my first whole year of being an animator.....Lixu? how long have you been animating?

Lixu
10-18-2008, 01:55 AM
Seriously, rawgreen and paintball, ****you.
Never heard of any ****ing sarcasm?
Pieces of shit.

Doe rustig, ik was ook sarcastisch bezig.

Raffi
10-18-2008, 01:59 AM
oh snap


*inspired*



And wtf is Ghyodon on about. When did Rawgreen and that didn't take sarcasm?

Lixu
10-19-2008, 03:47 AM
Wow wow wait, inspired? Niiiice :D Thanks yous Raffehzzz