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forneverdead
10-19-2008, 08:00 PM
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17743000/ngbbs48fbd79acc158.gif

What do u guys think???? High Beginner or Intermediate
and tell me what needs work

Request
10-19-2008, 08:04 PM
I hate ratings.

But med beginner.

Work on your movements
and easing then you will
be decent.

Arch-Angel
10-19-2008, 08:10 PM
wait. wait, WAIT.
Did you mean beginner?
Needs better movements, physics, and easing. Not long enough either, and lack of detail.

Request
10-19-2008, 08:12 PM
Shit typo .

BloodFruit
10-19-2008, 08:20 PM
No, not high.

Like med maybe.

forneverdead
10-19-2008, 09:19 PM
the physics are supposed to be like tht -_-

forneverdead
10-19-2008, 10:02 PM
here's a better one (well edited)
i call it Damn invisible walls >:( (lmao)

http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17744000/ngbbs48fbf547a581f.gif

poppetje3D
10-20-2008, 04:07 AM
Non of them!

Med. beginner

They bend unrealistic , I dont like that.
Dont post in others damn threads.

Automaton
10-20-2008, 06:44 AM
It seems to wobbly, and a little under-eased. Practice smoothness, easing and making it less wobbly and more realistic. You're not too far from high beginner though. Believe me, getting from high beginner to border inter and then inter was the hardest step to make in animating for me, and I'm STILL not inter.

Rabstar
10-20-2008, 07:07 AM
U need to ease more...
I personally like the movements...cause I do sorta unrealistic movements! ^^
Med-high beg
Needs more easing, and ull be high.

Gyohdon
10-20-2008, 02:54 PM
Am I a High Beginner Boarder Inter???

This belongs on the failblog.

forneverdead
10-20-2008, 07:29 PM
ok i took what u guys said into account and re-did the whole thing
here it is
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17439000/ngbbs48c99818ac30c.gif

billster-knight
10-20-2008, 07:48 PM
weird movements O.O but other than that it was good =]

forneverdead
10-20-2008, 09:47 PM
FOR THE LAST TIME THE MOVEMENTS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE LIEK THT. caps = cruise control for cool :3
INTER attempt its not done probably will never be and yea ill slow it down eventually
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/16572000/ngbbs4851c7c61430b.gif

mapex
10-20-2008, 09:59 PM
ok i took what u guys said into account and re-did the whole thing
here it is
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17439000/ngbbs48c99818ac30c.gif


i love the movement in this, how it sort of looks like they are just throwing their limbs numbly to punch and kick. i think this looks really cool and sort of cartoony.

BluGil
10-20-2008, 10:57 PM
i like the floppyness of it but parts are still awkard, as if they have too little space to move or soemthing. Plus they sorta have random spasms. give it some more time and effort and youll rock some socks tho cause those are pretty damn good. ps i think you should do a ragdoll animation with a guy being thrown around itd be cool to watch :]

Request
10-20-2008, 11:00 PM
FOR THE LAST TIME THE MOVEMENTS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE LIEK THT. caps = cruise control for cool :3
INTER attempt its not done probably will never be and yea ill slow it down eventually
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/16572000/ngbbs4851c7c61430b.gif


This may be High Beginner.

Gyohdon
10-21-2008, 03:53 AM
I seriously love the blood

forneverdead
10-21-2008, 08:16 PM
Thnx for all the C&C guys and the positive reviews :D
but some sad news is that i lost the .piv for the Sword anime -_- but i will redo it mark my words

Arch-Angel
10-21-2008, 09:12 PM
U need to ease more...
I personally like the movements...cause I do sorta unrealistic movements! ^^
Med-high beg
Needs more easing, and ull be high.
med-high? One or the other.


I seriously love the blood
Blood is bad, are you serious?
The sword one was low beginner at most =/
The one before that was around high beginner.
So what if the moves are supposed to look like that? It's improper physics, and it just proves that you cannot animate full fledged movements.

LN3uq
10-21-2008, 09:29 PM
Needs more frames.

Otherwise, I have to say they weren't (except for the first one) bad

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
10-21-2008, 10:15 PM
Beginner.. if I could go lower I would, but I don't want to hurt feelings, so I won't.

Your motion isn't bad, really, the movement is smooth enough. I'll give a real critique though when i see a real animation. People here need to start making stuff that's more than a split second long.

forneverdead
10-22-2008, 09:47 PM
hmmm no it doesnt hurt my feelings im 21 roflcoptor and im starting to make a longer skate one this is the beginning so far
http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/91000/91274_skate.gif

LN3uq
10-22-2008, 10:51 PM
I doubt you are 21, judging by your vocabulary and the part where you used the ****ing bricked emoticon in your signature.

Gyohdon
10-23-2008, 04:44 AM
hmmm no it doesnt hurt my feelings im 12 roflcoptor and im starting to make a longer skate one this is the beginning so far

FIX'D

DAMNNIT

BLABLABLA

forneverdead
10-23-2008, 08:26 AM
FIX'D

DAMNNIT

BLABLABLA

ok yeah im 12 sure and u cant doubt that i'm 21 cuz you're probably a little 15 year old punk bitch at home trying to look cool by acting tough.

and i cant be immature?? is that against some law???

invertin
10-23-2008, 01:35 PM
I'm nearly 15 now and even I know how to spell. Anyone older than 13/14 would know that it doesn't make you look clever to spell incorrectly and there's no need to type really quickly and rush it.

There is no excuse for not spelling properly other than you can't.

In your defense, that was kinda immature there. But atleast it was funny.

Bit fast, but you've mentioned that. So I guess I'll just point out the weird way the sword flips round.

forneverdead
10-23-2008, 01:56 PM
Bit fast, but you've mentioned that. So I guess I'll just point out the weird way the sword flips round.

yea i know i gotta fix that i updated it a little
http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/91000/91361_inter_attempt2.gif

this is my other attempt but with skating :D
http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/91000/91353_skate.gif

Automaton
10-23-2008, 01:57 PM
I think you maybe need to try and add a little more easing?

forneverdead
10-23-2008, 03:01 PM
I think you maybe need to try and add a little more easing?

which one? the skater or sword

Gyohdon
10-24-2008, 03:34 PM
ok yeah im 12 sure and u cant doubt that i'm 21 cuz you're probably a little 15 year old idiot at home(duh?) being cool by stating the most logical age of forneverdead.

Damn, I have to fix a lot.

By the way, a 21 year old wouldn't say roflcopter, dumbass.
I'm 15 though, great guess.

Allaweec
10-24-2008, 03:52 PM
What the hell was that.... YOU, beginner, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
YOu pwning.... that animasjon was nice

forneverdead
10-24-2008, 09:32 PM
something new im workin on C&C?
http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/91000/91746_woohoo.gif

lazlohouse
10-24-2008, 11:44 PM
its not bad but its a bit stiff

forneverdead
10-25-2008, 12:05 PM
update to my super combo thing
http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/91000/91870_apeyay.gif

klassen
10-25-2008, 02:02 PM
ok, stop the floppiness thing
it takes away from the animation
uve got potential, though
just work on easing and stiffness

forneverdead
10-27-2008, 06:44 PM
ok check this out guys another almost done boarder/inter attempt

http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17798000/ngbbs490651ff8a483.gif

Omega
10-27-2008, 07:46 PM
ok check this out guys another almost done boarder/inter attempt

http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17798000/ngbbs490651ff8a483.gif

Oh, come on. Those movements were all ripped straight from Jcamelo's Sekret Collab Part.

It's stiff; needs to be more fluid. More easing too.

LN3uq
10-27-2008, 07:57 PM
You know, I can't help but feel like I've said this before.

ADD MORE FRAMES

forneverdead
10-27-2008, 08:10 PM
Oh, come on. Those movements were all ripped straight from Jcamelo's Sekret Collab Part.

It's stiff; needs to be more fluid. More easing too.

i know i forgot to put the pivot remake sorry i forgot and here's the slowished down version and im not done with it
http://upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/choppedll58.gif

forneverdead
10-27-2008, 08:11 PM
oh btw im leaving this forum neway cuz framerate is better

GotPepsi
10-27-2008, 10:08 PM
oh btw I'm leaving this forum neway cuz framerate is better

Your just mad, because people are calling you High, or mid beginner. But your animations are good. i like them. I think the runs and alot of other stuff seem a little choppy, i think you should add more frames. Also, the animation with the stair case, the stick that is also running seems like he is on ice. seems like there is no traction. But your pretty good i like. Mid beginner. Btw whats up with all these "high mid beginner, low inter?" threads

Pnuts
10-29-2008, 11:31 PM
What's people's ****ing problems, using age as an insult? Every where I go someone insults someone else by denying their age. I am serious, I will ****ing run around screaming in the night if I don't see it happen to me in the next week. It happens everywhere I go god damn it. People don't even have anything to be worried about, what is the point of undermining someone's age, or work? What do they gain? Nothing! It is pointless. Let me say that again. P-O-I-N-T-L-E-S-S. Pointless.


Back on topic, I really think your animations are well done, and deserve praise, or at least constructive criticism.

The first one was a little wobbly.

The last one, I didn't like.

I thought the rest were pretty much fine.

Tok - Xil
10-30-2008, 12:21 PM
Pnuts, i agree. Its like telling a three year old they have a small penis.
Not EXACTLY the same - but the principle remains.
How can you insult someone for how old they are? You can insult someone if they are acting younger than they are, but besides that...

zawmbee
10-30-2008, 12:23 PM
Your good, as that a suitable answer?

Tok - Xil
10-30-2008, 12:26 PM
huh?
Whut?
sense?

forneverdead
11-04-2008, 07:29 PM
Umm guys im sorry to tell you my brother has been using my account and started this thread and has been using Ape's and my animations as his own and i have changed my password so he can no longer use it im sorry for the inconvenience and i dont like being ranked anyway i animate because it is fun. But once again i apologize on his behalf

sheezy2
11-04-2008, 08:27 PM
Umm guys im sorry to tell you my brother has been using my account and started this thread and has been using Ape's and my animations as his own and i have changed my password so he can no longer use it im sorry for the inconvenience and i dont like being ranked anyway i animate because it is fun. But once again i apologize on his behalf = bullshit
you tricky you:Undercover::Undercover:

FoShizzle
11-04-2008, 08:31 PM
the skater one looks eased enough.

Arch-Angel
11-04-2008, 08:34 PM
One of the first ones was high beginner.
all of the others are low =/

ape
11-04-2008, 08:39 PM
Ok, the two that he posted on the second page were mine.

The supposed "re-make" and the sword animation.

And those were old anyways.

JoeyBlondeBear
11-04-2008, 08:55 PM
Who wants to bet that Ape and forever are the same person? Wouldn't be surprising, I have seen this like a hundred times.

Anyways, I do like your animations, a lot better than mine :)

Your main problem is easing I've got to say, and the animations are way to fast. Slow it down a little bit.

ape
11-04-2008, 09:01 PM
Sure.

I'll take that bet.

Just look at the spacing and style of both the animations, not to mention the drop in skill between them.

Of course I have a secondary account, and I post on it, just to have animations below my level of skill.

Of course.

Because that isn't completely retarded.

forneverdead
11-04-2008, 09:28 PM
Sure.

I'll take that bet.

Just look at the spacing and style of both the animations, not to mention the drop in skill between them.

Of course I have a secondary account, and I post on it, just to have animations below my level of skill.

Of course.

Because that isn't completely retarded.

Ape way to just bitch slap him in the face.
Btw Ape is way better than me and probably anyone else in this thread.
and if i was ape why would i say my animations weren't mine??? go read the post i put on the last page explaining wtf happened. Btw nobody talk to Dokt0rZhad0ws or Demonemo07 they're both my brother the dumbass who originally made this thread on my account.

on a different note here's on of my animations
Im trying to remake UNBALANCED originally by Terkoiz (phil)
Tell me how you guys like it
http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/94000/94330_yay_.gif

megaanims
11-04-2008, 09:33 PM
you sure cuz I never saw any new anims from him

forneverdead
11-04-2008, 09:35 PM
you sure cuz I never saw any new anims from him

he just joined he's an intermediate trust me im on three other sites with him. He's DrainBamage on FrameRate and Ape4 on newgrounds

ape
11-04-2008, 09:39 PM
What?

I haven't even been posting here. How the hell will I make something new!?

And how the hell would you see it?

Stop trying to gain forum appeal by acting smart and saying you "Have seen this 100 times". Another thing...why would we both be online at the same time?

So yeah, I'm sure.

Cuz you're being a moron.

forneverdead
11-04-2008, 09:41 PM
Who wants to bet that Ape and forever are the same person? Wouldn't be surprising, I have seen this like a hundred times.

Anyways, I do like your animations, a lot better than mine :)

Your main problem is easing I've got to say, and the animations are way to fast. Slow it down a little bit.

dude one thing i technically only have 3 or 4 of my animations on here and talk to me about easing when u ease urs (no attitude just advice) and they're supposed to be th- wait which ones?

megaanims
11-04-2008, 09:50 PM
What?

I haven't even been posting here. How the hell will I make something new!?

And how the hell would you see it?

Stop trying to gain forum appeal by acting smart and saying you "Have seen this 100 times". Another thing...why would we both be online at the same time?

So yeah, I'm sure.

Cuz you're being a moron.
who are you calling moron?!

sheezy2
11-04-2008, 10:15 PM
both of you .

megaanims
11-04-2008, 10:47 PM
what the-w8 whos the other moron

sheezy2
11-04-2008, 10:48 PM
you.
and
you
proved
my
point.

forneverdead
11-09-2008, 06:25 PM
hey um my pivot redux to unbalanced
http://upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/containedbiggerve8w.gif (http://animatorhost.com/index.php?page=viewf&file=containedbiggerve8w.gif&name=DoKt0rZhAd0ws)

LN3uq
11-09-2008, 07:46 PM
Still needs more frames.

Socks
11-09-2008, 07:49 PM
NOES U IS TEH EXPART!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOlololo!!!!!!!!1111!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111111!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I RLy MEANZ ITZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111111111 !!!!!!!!!oneoneoneone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111 111!!!!!!!!!

forneverdead
11-09-2008, 07:57 PM
103 frames and still working on it
http://upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/containedbigger2a7h.gif (http://animatorhost.com/index.php?page=viewf&file=containedbigger2a7h.gif&name=DoKt0rZhAd0ws)

megaanims
11-10-2008, 03:54 AM
wow you did that in 103 frames usually that would in pivot around 200-400 in flash a 500-1000

Covalence
11-10-2008, 05:26 PM
I liked one of your older animations in this thread, but when I saw these new recent ones, they turned out to be worse quality, and you've been most likely animating constantly.

Big problem there. If someone tells you to add more frames, or add more easing, you should probably add more frames and easing to your later animations too. That's your main problem that holds you back from becoming a "high beginner border inter."

.Busted
11-11-2008, 01:02 AM
med-high? One or the other.


Blood is bad, are you serious?
The sword one was low beginner at most =/
The one before that was around high beginner.
So what if the moves are supposed to look like that? It's improper physics, and it just proves that you cannot animate full fledged movements.
I didn't like the blood either.

FOR THE LAST TIME THE MOVEMENTS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE LIEK THT. caps = cruise control for cool :3
INTER attempt its not done probably will never be and yea ill slow it down eventually
You'll never get to inter with that flinging themselves around crap.


ok i took what u guys said into account and re-did the whole thing
here it is
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17439000/ngbbs48c99818ac30c.gif
Am I the only one who noticed he barely hit the. . . .invisible wall and he fell down.

Keep workin though I definetly see potential.

forneverdead
11-11-2008, 04:42 PM
wow you did that in 103 frames usually that would in pivot around 200-400 in flash a 500-1000

yea i know haha im just too awesome.
Neway update
162frames
http://upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/contained125b.gif

klassen
11-11-2008, 07:41 PM
when you re-did the whole thing on the first one it was amazing
but in teh latest ones, the way they move doesnt work
its too slopy and spazy to show any potential