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Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
10-23-2008, 11:14 PM
Inking is harder than it sounds.
http://www.thirdfaction.net/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/shadowconcept1.jpg

Round two, action shot:
http://www.thirdfaction.net/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/shadowleap.jpg

I did another one, not of shadow, but it's still concept art...

http://www.thirdfaction.net/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/dphoenix.jpg

Sunder Forge
10-23-2008, 11:50 PM
The waste is was too small, as are the hands. The bottom of the cape wth the jagged lines, has very little detail, and looks rushed. The top half is good, bottom half needs work.

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
10-23-2008, 11:58 PM
The waste is wat too small, as are the hands. The bottom of the cape wth the jagged lines, has very little detail, and looks rushed. The top half is good, bottom half needs work.

Aye, I'll probably do a second draft.

Thanks for the critique though.

Jason Fett
10-23-2008, 11:59 PM
How do you people draw so good this is my best

http://i393.photobucket.com/albums/pp18/JasonFett/thte4.jpg

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
10-24-2008, 12:11 AM
How do you people draw so good this is my best

http://i393.photobucket.com/albums/pp18/JasonFett/thte4.jpg

Because a lot of us have been at it for many years trying to improve.

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
10-24-2008, 12:37 AM
The waste is was too small, as are the hands. The bottom of the cape wth the jagged lines, has very little detail, and looks rushed. The top half is good, bottom half needs work.

K, fixed most the stuff you were talking about in the original post. Thanks!

Didn't change the hands though, they are OK with me.

Sunder Forge
10-24-2008, 02:44 PM
Hmmm, something still seems wrong...
About what you chnaged: The waist looks much better, cape looks better, but not really what I had in mind, I was thinking more along the lines of :

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/52885_cape.png
ya know? looks more realistic and has a more "shreaded" feel to it..

For the hands, they just look too tiny in comparison to the rest of the arm:

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/53334_arm.png
The left arm is one whole circle bigger then the right.

naxai
10-24-2008, 03:38 PM
nice pic and detaild drawing, the only i thing i didnt like was the way he was standing. really good :)

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
10-24-2008, 06:52 PM
Hmmm, something still seems wrong...
About what you chnaged: The waist looks much better, cape looks better, but not really what I had in mind, I was thinking more along the lines of :

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/52885_cape.png
ya know? looks more realistic and has a more "shreaded" feel to it..

For the hands, they just look too tiny in comparison to the rest of the arm:

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/53334_arm.png
The left arm is one whole circle bigger then the right.

Ah I see, I love visual aids!

..I'll see what I can do.

eh. in inking this think the picture got to complicated and is now too hard to edit. Guess I'll have to make a sequel.

raidforce
10-25-2008, 06:56 AM
I like your new drawings, they both have interesting shots.

Mantha
10-25-2008, 11:53 AM
Shadow's torso and waist in the first picture look weird.

The second one is fabulus.

The third's arm looks like in a weird position. And those ropes don't look as if they were hanging in the air or whatever.

Nice to see you back, if only for a little while.

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
10-26-2008, 03:49 PM
Thanks guys!

Yeah I'm going to have to do some life drawing to get a better grasp on shading. For some reason I suck balls at it.