View Full Version : Paper Boat Poem (first poem)

Jason Fett
10-23-2008, 11:10 PM
Can you build a paper boat

I can build one that can float

It can float around my moat

Note its just a paper boat


10-26-2008, 07:51 PM
Can you touch your dick

I can touch one like a stick

It can swirl around that girl

Note its just a dick


But seriously, try attempting more complex poems. To really fascinate or intrigue people, you're going to have to go beyond 4-line rhymes about paper boats.

10-26-2008, 09:51 PM
That was really lame. Everything positive about it gets flushed away in it's blatant simplicity. If the poems this short already, don't use the same rhyme two ****ing times, it seems even more uncreative then.