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Apples
03-07-2008, 07:28 PM
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/428923
Vote 5 plez.
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elite34
03-07-2008, 07:31 PM
I remember seeing the beginning when you posted it. Nice one Apples
I voted 5 :3

Apples
03-07-2008, 07:34 PM
I remember seeing the beginning when you posted it. Nice one Apples
I voted 5 :3

Told you I would finish.
Thanks there.
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T Man
03-07-2008, 07:35 PM
i didn't really like it. the shading sucked, the blood needs a lot of work, and the movements were a little awkward.
also the sticks were weirdly drawn.

Apples
03-07-2008, 07:38 PM
i didn't really like it. the shading sucked, the blood needs a lot of work, and the movements were a little awkward.
also the sticks were weirdly drawn.

:c
Wells, I dont remember putting shading in there, so I dont know what your talking about...

T Man
03-07-2008, 07:39 PM
exactly its all bland

Apples
03-08-2008, 07:28 AM
Well, I am glad this passed with a well score.
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Aycaramba
03-08-2008, 09:34 AM
If i were you, i would use line a bit more in the animation.

elite34
03-08-2008, 09:35 AM
Told you I would finish.
Thanks there.
:]

I remember you said you would finish for me. I feel so honored :3

PivotmasterXX
03-08-2008, 01:04 PM
It is good...But it seemed, well just...shakey...and...weird.
But still it was ok...8/10
Work on your blood.:heh:

samiran
05-21-2008, 08:59 AM
Ok That was good
a bit improvement on the fire part!

Tolin
05-21-2008, 09:05 AM
Ok That was good
a bit improvement on the fire part!

This thread is old, don't bump it...

Artemis_Neetcudt
05-21-2008, 09:14 PM
one of the main problems, were that the sticks were kinda weird...the blood was also bad though =(