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Foruncande
10-27-2008, 08:55 PM
What should i improve?

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/4121/airplanehitpt2.gif

Foruncande
10-28-2008, 04:21 PM
no posts :P bump

poppetje3D
10-28-2008, 04:35 PM
Eeeehm lemme think..




everything :3
it doesnt need to be stiff .
why a huge bullet?
could use bettar fx? :D
Next time u could battar post at the beginners section.
Bay bay :)

M3D
10-28-2008, 05:02 PM
Eeeehm lemme think..




everything :3
it doesnt need to be stiff .
why a huge bullet?
could use bettar fx? :D
Next time u could battar post at the beginners section.
Bay bay :)

Foruncande this guys is one of the nub fags you shouldn't listen to.
Fags like him can't give good tips properly.
If they tell you whats wrong with the anim then they could tell you how to fix it.

Okay for now all I can say is keep animating.
If I go into detail about things you may be confused and think I'm talking shit.

So for now just study other good animators, Look out for the words:
easing and physics buddy.

Keep going.

Oh go here and you can get rad looking sticks to download.
www.droidz.org

Foruncande
10-28-2008, 06:47 PM
Foruncande this guys is one of the nub fags you shouldn't listen to.
Fags like him can't give good tips properly.
If they tell you whats wrong with the anim then they could tell you how to fix it.

Okay for now all I can say is keep animating.
If I go into detail about things you may be confused and think I'm talking shit.

So for now just study other good animators, Look out for the words:
easing and physics buddy.

Keep going.

Oh go here and you can get rad looking sticks to download.



ok i made this right after i got pivot no tuts or anything 0% knowledge of pivot lol

Geiasoy
10-28-2008, 07:43 PM
WOAH, i just realized that before the stick caught the bullet, it changed direction randomly...

pzero
10-29-2008, 04:21 AM
Eeeehm lemme think..




everything :3
it doesnt need to be stiff .
why a huge bullet?
could use bettar fx? :D
Next time u could battar post at the beginners section.
Bay bay :)

totaly agree :Undercover:

poppetje3D
10-29-2008, 10:22 AM
Foruncande this guys is one of the nub fags you shouldn't listen to.

HAY! thats realy mean.
I was bored :3
And i can give good tips :@

Jtech6
10-29-2008, 12:28 PM
Foruncande this guys is one of the nub fags you shouldn't listen to.
Fags like him can't give good tips properly.
If they tell you whats wrong with the anim then they could tell you how to fix it.

Okay for now all I can say is keep animating.
If I go into detail about things you may be confused and think I'm talking shit.

So for now just study other good animators, Look out for the words:
easing and physics buddy.

Keep going.



Yeah definately. Except the 'ooh that kids a fag' stuff, I dont know because im barely ever on here. But yeah, learn easing and physics. ^_-

Pnuts
10-29-2008, 08:22 PM
Well, I agree to M3D, but also, I want to add that there are a multitude of pivot-specific tutorials, in the tutorial section. (duh) They can help with many things, such as running, walking, punching, flipping, kicking, and what not. However, if you try to learn from someone who doesn't know what they are doing themselves, well... it won't work. All I can say is that pivot is fun, but it takes a lot of work to be good at it, and with practice you can succeed.

chips
10-29-2008, 09:25 PM
Its good for a first, but what the hell happend? The guy draws on the floor and gets hit by a plane?

tehninja6
10-29-2008, 11:00 PM
his arms and legs twitch for no reason. and the anim is real stiff. actually idk how to work pivot or easytoon because i use flash 8, so my expectations may be a little high, but thats what i think you could improve on.

dagang5ta
11-01-2008, 03:38 AM
Smoother, make the explosion in colour and faster.