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LakE
10-31-2008, 04:23 PM
Their bullets break the atmosphere,
the childrens fear is in the air,
the naive despair.

Is this right or is this wrong?
We take our orders,
we take them strong.
Clear on what we have to do,
we do it - through and through.
Do it - through and through.

We are fighting for survival.
But it's a losing war,
You've locked the doors.
We are fighting for revival.
But it's a losing war,
You've locked the doors.

Unsure on what there is to do,
We turn to you,
our holy ghost,
Our ghostly host.
You put out your hand and gave us a plan,
Your expectations may not be met,
but we are in your debt.

We seem to be running in endless circles,
looking for a hole in the wall.
Running down a doorless hall.
This war is just the start.

We are fighting for survival.
But it's a losing war,
You've locked the doors.
We are fighting for revival.
But it's a losing war,
You've locked the doors.

We are fighting for the sins of our fathers.
Although we were not fathered.
We want to make you proud dad.

Left to die on the battlefield,
"We're fighting a losing battle, son.
We weren't equipped with a gun."

We went in with peace on our mind.
But our negotians were declined.

We were fighting for survival,
but we have lost.
You locked the doors.
We were fighting for revival,
but we were lost.
On our own grounds.


I need help on quite a lot since they feel pretty weak and don't flow as well as I wish.
Any help will be appreciated.

The first part I really need to change.

LakE
10-31-2008, 08:31 PM
Edited it, changing things here and there. Still un-sure on it.