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Upps
11-01-2008, 05:06 PM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=266323

I got way betterz naw.

Arch-Angel
11-01-2008, 05:20 PM
Huge improvement.
Instead of dissipating your effects like that, add more particles underneath, instead of an outline dissipation.

Upps
11-01-2008, 06:36 PM
Thanks!!
More.

Kitsune
11-01-2008, 06:46 PM
Delay in the first jump's 'whoosh'.

The red guy gets up way too fast. Of course he could fight back, but him getting up in half a second after falling feels unrealistic. I would have him attempting to get up, or having him get enough time to get up rather than squishing the frames together. A good way to mend this could be key animating and in between animating. Animate every 5 frames in the timeline, make sure it all makes sense, and fill the stuff in between. Worth a try, eh?

Overall, well done. It isn't bad at all.

RawGreen
11-01-2008, 06:48 PM
it seems ether too fast, or if you want to keep it at this speed, ease it up some more.

Upps
11-01-2008, 07:06 PM
I was aiming at getting him bounce really hard in a shaky way from the smash, and landing inintentially on his feet, but it looks reall off and choppy.

I'll keep at it this way.