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Saha
11-02-2008, 05:29 AM
http://www.swfme.com/view/1048562
http://www.swfupload.com/view/129943.htm
http://www.stonesbucket.com/upload/view_upload.php?id=CgVLCHq0
The inters attempt is finally out.

This is my and rabstars inters attempt.
The whole idea started by a small joint. After months of progress.. its finish.
Sadly, since I've quited pivot. This joint was forced to be have an ending.

Thank you pf0.. friend, mentor and inspiration

Well.. Inters?

I'm not comming back to the pivot section. I'll just give cc and hang around for a bit.


That's one cool animation there.

>.>
CREDTITS TO BONK FOR FLASHING IT

INTERS PL0X

Sherbet
11-02-2008, 05:35 AM
wow, this is amazing
i definately think saha is interz, rab.. your about boarder

i love this animation though

iExp3rt
11-02-2008, 05:37 AM
Like...





HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!

Saha
11-02-2008, 05:39 AM
Oh god.. not you.. Thanks sherbet.

iExp3rt is Adrian btw..

I think I just released hell upon this forum.

LakE
11-02-2008, 05:40 AM
Like...





HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!

Don't do that.

I couldn't really tell what was going on in the animation. Well, I could, but I found it difficult to tell who did which parts.
The constantly changing music was weird aswell.
Good work though, man.

Bonk
11-02-2008, 05:42 AM
That's one cool animation there.

>.>

iExp3rt
11-02-2008, 05:43 AM
Don't do that.

I couldn't really tell what was going on in the animation. Well, I could, but I found it difficult to tell who did which parts.
The constantly changing music was weird aswell.
Good work though, man.

Lol ok... -.- I was juz bored. :Sweating:

Saha
11-02-2008, 05:43 AM
Thanks lake..

The anim doesn't really have a good and organized story line.

Sorry for that.

LakE
11-02-2008, 05:44 AM
Oh, wait.
There wasn't a wide variety of songs, some shit was playing on another tab. My bad. Derp.

poppetje3D
11-02-2008, 05:57 AM
Meh.
Didn't like the music!
Although the animation was awesome :)
Oh yea the text.
Next time make that bettar , i could not reed it for shit!

iExp3rt
11-02-2008, 06:05 AM
Ima start again.

Nice animation o.o

Stormwalker
11-02-2008, 06:30 AM
Hmm.... nope sorry not inters yet , some point were intermediate , not sure whose were those, but then it kinda dropped down , especially near the end. Anyway I don't see the point of you bot caring about your ranks , the only good use I see for ranks is dividing in groups for collabs and such but come on you don't need attempts , those are silly , just animate and you'll get there eventually. The animation was pretty well done overall , alto I didn't understand what was going on. Also seemed as inspired by Black & White

Rabstar
11-02-2008, 07:20 AM
It was.

Saha! Gratz, you put it up! ^^.

So, no interz? ):

Stormwalker
11-02-2008, 07:40 AM
It was.

Saha! Gratz, you put it up! ^^.

So, no interz? ):

Not really yet , but that shouldn't get you down , trust me your not that far from there , and in the long run you shouldn't even give a shit.

zawmbee
11-02-2008, 08:10 AM
lol, intermediate these days.
That was like high beginner, the movements sucked, they were jerky, unrealistic and down right moronic.
The spacing was awful, it was all over the place, didn't suite the fight.
Overall, not so good.
Also, joints cannot get intermediate.
Make separate attempts.

RawGreen
11-02-2008, 08:15 AM
your name pops up and flashes so many times it gets annoying... yeah, you're pretty close to inter, but, what do I know?

M3D
11-02-2008, 08:36 AM
Hmm.... nope sorry not inters yet , some point were intermediate , not sure whose were those, but then it kinda dropped down , especially near the end. Anyway I don't see the point of you bot caring about your ranks , the only good use I see for ranks is dividing in groups for collabs and such but come on you don't need attempts , those are silly , just animate and you'll get there eventually. The animation was pretty well done overall , alto I didn't understand what was going on. Also seemed as inspired by Black & White
Totally agree.

Not really yet , but that shouldn't get you down, trust me your not that far from there , and in the long run you shouldn't even give a shit.
Totally agree.

lol, intermediate these days.
That was like high beginner, the movements sucked, they were jerky, unrealistic and down right moronic.
The spacing was awful, it was all over the place, didn't suite the fight.
Overall, not so good.
Also, joints cannot get intermediate.
Make separate attempts.
Well, zawmbee is experienced in pivot [If he ever makes a long anim]
but he knows what he's talking about even though it might seem harsh.
He is also right about intermediates and joints. Unless it is an eye sex of an anim [which me and my old friend Uber Gamer used to do]

Now my input. Some of the movements look lazy like.
You need to exaggerate while animating, and what I mean by that, pivot wise is:
--Move the back bone more, in every frame move it and make it look noticeable.
--Don't be afraid to put ALLOT of force in the punch and kicks.
You spend so much time focusing on easing meanwhile the movements aren't that good.
Like one of the punches looked gay but was smooth.

So yeah, if you guys got more questions just ask.

Raffi
11-02-2008, 08:44 AM
The music at first ws good, but when the music got good you changed it and completely ruined it.


And I couldn't tell what was going on at all. Everyone was changing colours and shit. Some of the animation was good though.

Saha
11-02-2008, 08:51 AM
Thanks guys.. Although, I wont be animating pivot.

I'll use the advice you guys gave me on my future fights on flash, though.

zawmbee
11-02-2008, 08:54 AM
I'm not harsh, i'm just spunky :'C
Saha, i hope you didn't take it the rude way? >_>

M3D
11-02-2008, 09:04 AM
Oh, no harsh is good. I never said it was bad.

Zawmbee c'mon, remember in our old days we KNOW what harsh is lol
These days they get it easy on them.
In darkdemon, I would get harsh CC but it always helped me.

zawmbee
11-02-2008, 09:12 AM
Ah, i guess your right.
These days i get NO CC.
I miss the good ol' days :c

clouds_in_the_sky
11-02-2008, 09:15 AM
i remember doomdoer. what happened to him?

zawmbee
11-02-2008, 09:16 AM
He got bannedededed.

clouds_in_the_sky
11-02-2008, 09:18 AM
oh well. I CLAIM THE TITLE OF DOOMDOER!!!!12!
my my. This has become a spam thread.

zawmbee
11-02-2008, 09:20 AM
No, your just a fag.

clouds_in_the_sky
11-02-2008, 09:21 AM
fine then. I won't post.

Rabstar
11-02-2008, 11:37 AM
Totally agree.

Totally agree.

Well, zawmbee is experienced in pivot [If he ever makes a long anim]
but he knows what he's talking about even though it might seem harsh.
He is also right about intermediates and joints. Unless it is an eye sex of an anim [which me and my old friend Uber Gamer used to do]

Now my input. Some of the movements look lazy like.
You need to exaggerate while animating, and what I mean by that, pivot wise is:
--Move the back bone more, in every frame move it and make it look noticeable.
--Don't be afraid to put ALLOT of force in the punch and kicks.
You spend so much time focusing on easing meanwhile the movements aren't that good.
Like one of the punches looked gay but was smooth.

So yeah, if you guys got more questions just ask.

K, M3D! ^^ THx.
Come on MSn, we can chat! ^^


Edit:
We wouldnt mind harsh, just as long as it isnt:

The spacing sucked cock. And you suck cock, blah blah blah...lol

But harsh plz! ^^
Thx for the CC guys!

Automaton
11-02-2008, 11:37 AM
Off topic:

Why did doomdoer actually get banned? He was like the best animator on here.

On topic:

Like Others have said, some bits were inter, others weren't. And some of the movements were bad IMO, like at the beginning when he gets hit and he sorta goes all stiff and lands on his bent leg lol.

Rabstar
11-02-2008, 11:39 AM
Oh yeh, That was my part, it was right before I got my animation block.

power fuse0
11-02-2008, 02:17 PM
1 and a half months?!
bloody hell o.0
my 4000 frame thing took us 2 weeks. and thats 4000 frames of about the same standard. Anyway.
Its alright, nice Job (:

Arch-Angel
11-02-2008, 08:17 PM
Some parts were intermediate (mainly the easing)
Movements were bad, and spacing needs work.

Music was bad as well.

Rabstar
11-02-2008, 10:07 PM
1 and a half months?!
bloody hell o.0
my 4000 frame thing took us 2 weeks. and thats 4000 frames of about the same standard. Anyway.
Its alright, nice Job (:

Half of it was lazyness, and procrastinating. =D