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Devour
11-03-2008, 03:46 PM
A simple jump test. I practiced a lot on the basics before making this, though. I hope its not too shitty.
http://www.*************/open/1225744788

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=680933

Kitsune
11-03-2008, 03:50 PM
Resizing I saw. His arms looked a bit stiff in the liftoff too. It's as if he had to not drop his arms.

Kensei
11-03-2008, 04:13 PM
IF his head was higher up and he had feet it would be better...

Devour
11-03-2008, 04:24 PM
Nah. Feet aren't part of my style at the moment.
Do you have any helpful C&C?

GrimDesign
11-03-2008, 04:38 PM
The Feet be with you, always.
Feet is the hip thang now man, you gotta get into the zOnE!
In any case I can't see it, because you used Swfcabin. :D

Omega
11-03-2008, 05:23 PM
Good easing; smooth jump.
Bad art.
Wobbly.
Lots of resizing.

Shanto
11-03-2008, 05:32 PM
Really well animated.
Joints are being all weird and stuff
resizing

basically everything in the above posts.

Devour
11-03-2008, 05:57 PM
The Feet be with you, always.
Feet is the hip thang now man, you gotta get into the zOnE!
In any case I can't see it, because you used Swfcabin. :D
I'll upload it at a different site. Which places can you veiw?

Good easing; smooth jump.
Bad art.
Wobbly.
Lots of resizing.
Thanks. I'll work on that.


Really well animated.
Joints are being all weird and stuff
resizing

basically everything in the above posts.
Lol.

More comments?

Bonk
11-03-2008, 06:15 PM
Rawr swfcabin.

Devour
11-03-2008, 06:39 PM
I dont know any other swf uploaing site that works. I'll use another one if you give me a link to it.

Bonk
11-03-2008, 07:01 PM
Everyone uses this (http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/).

Devour
11-03-2008, 07:06 PM
Okay. I edited the first post.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=680933

Bonk
11-03-2008, 07:13 PM
Uhm...

There wasn't enough power to jump that high, there weren't enough frames of arm spinning, and there was wobblyness at the end of the land, especially where his leg became triple jointed with a little extra line near the back of the knee.

Spitzer
11-03-2008, 08:44 PM
dont be a dick head

add feet

and yeah, does your head come out of your chest?

if so, pics.

also he's very shaky

and stiff

and the background sucks

the sky isnt white

physics stank

easing was good

emoboy
11-04-2008, 11:05 AM
Even your avatar jump looks better! How can this be?

Rabstar
11-04-2008, 11:09 AM
small fidget at the end, and a bit of resizing in the air.
And needs higher fps. ^^

GrimDesign
11-04-2008, 12:05 PM
Ewwww.
Lookit that guy with no feet and it looks like his "upper arms" are like broad shoulders or something, meaning he's got short ass arms.
and the landing looks like he broke his knee's on impact, also in landing it looks like he's got a buttocks forming. lul. easing was okay though, everything else you need to work on