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Komaru
03-11-2008, 07:03 AM
http://www.swfup.com/file/151803

comments?
concerns?
ideas to make it better?

thanks!

EDIT:
Here's the more updated version:
http://www.swfup.com/file/152963
It works better if you use the SWF, though.
SWF Here:
http://www.mediafire.com/?f3ehhn1zort
EDIT #2:
Even more updated:
http://www.swfup.com/file/153957
http://www.mediafire.com/?zrxwn9azxld
Once again, media fire seems to work better.
Also, I forgot to remove the credits for the song.
Anything you have to say is greatly appreciated!

grapez
03-11-2008, 07:14 AM
load of !!!!!SHIT!!!!!!!

Raffi
03-11-2008, 10:56 AM
load of !!!!!SHIT!!!!!!!
Like you can do better.


That was ok. Noises were really weird, and when you die, the music starts as well as the music playing first.
And I think that the enemies moved a little too fast. And make them take away less life.

Paco
03-11-2008, 04:57 PM
improve on about,
-everything
-drawing
-gameplay


as of game play think about it, was that realy fun?
i would recomend thinking about the demensions when you design the game.
if its a vertical shooter it would probaly be larger in the vertical hight.
For the graphics and overal design of the game it looks like you spent no
time really at all.
most of the things are obvious that you can improve on.

Komaru
03-11-2008, 09:05 PM
Here's the more updated version:
http://www.swfup.com/file/152963
It works better if you use the SWF, though.
SWF Here:
http://www.mediafire.com/?f3ehhn1zort

Cereal Man
03-11-2008, 09:20 PM
It's great for a first, I say. Good job, you have potential. Keep at it.


Review wise: Let the ship move a biiiiiit slower or make your shit move a biiiiiit faster.

The bullets were annoying, but they added to the game.

Uh, just... don't use sound for awhile, or have a toggle button.

Other than that, it's pretty good.

Komaru
03-12-2008, 06:39 AM
Ok. Thanks, I'll get on that after school.

Komaru
03-12-2008, 08:59 PM
Even more updated:
http://www.swfup.com/file/153957
http://www.mediafire.com/?zrxwn9azxld
Once again, media fire seems to work better.
Also, I forgot to remove the credits for the song.
Anything you have to say is greatly appreciated!
Oh...I forgot the sound toggle again...sorry.

zymn
03-12-2008, 11:37 PM
wow.
thats better than what i've made...

did you read a tut?

if so, could you show me a link?