View Full Version : Eh, its a start.

11-04-2008, 06:48 PM

I screwed up the tail so bad.

But the rest is ok.

11-04-2008, 06:59 PM
Check this (http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35331) out.

11-04-2008, 07:00 PM
You're calling me a beginner?

11-04-2008, 07:15 PM
To avoid a flame bait...

You're title is "Eh, it's a start" thus leading me to believe you are new to ez toon.

You have 13 posts, so I assumed you were new.

11-04-2008, 07:26 PM
Not trying to lure you into a debate or arugment.

I'm simply wondering why you would link me to that section that specifically is suited for beginners, when I have an animation that showcases an effect and a slight Fullbody.

And with your response, you diddn't even base anything on the actual animation, just the thread title and my post count.

Speaking of the title, that was a mistake on my part. I came here looking for a way to improve the animation, and to get some critique.

Clearly I was wrong, nothing against you of course.

11-04-2008, 07:32 PM
Oh, it was my bad judgemant on that. I log on and off on these forums and I don't really know about recent stuff. You seem like a good animator.

Let me get to constructive critiscizm now,

The only problem I saw was how he shot back really fast, I don't know if it was intentional but it seems weird (im not sure why).

11-04-2008, 07:35 PM
Yeah, it was a major problem. I'm trying to fix it by easing him in circles and stuff.

And thank you for the comment, and with your post count and experiance on this site, its most likely an easy mistake and a correct assumption to make.

11-05-2008, 01:22 AM
The wobbly mouth looks good in a cartoony way, but while the edge wobbled the main body stayed pretty rigid throughout the beam.

Maybe add a slight sway.

11-05-2008, 07:56 AM
the thick lines outside and thin lines inside makes it unique ;)

gewd :D

the darkest white
11-06-2008, 01:31 PM
Appart from the wobbles it was really nice, kinda funny too. Good job!