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Saha
11-07-2008, 10:38 PM
http://www.swfme.com/view/1050812
Took me a few hours to get the best out of myself.

Its in 20 fps.
Well.. since I can attempt a run. I could attempt a fight.

What do you say?
CC please

Kitsune
11-07-2008, 10:56 PM
The run wasn't bad.
I like how he moves his upper body.

Not bad!

Request
11-07-2008, 10:57 PM
Hours for that?

Well it isn't bad, but
the knee moves to
high during the run.

Kensei
11-08-2008, 02:00 AM
The bottom half of his body is fine but his upper half needs alot of work. Make it look more natural.

But its pretty decent

Saha
11-08-2008, 05:17 AM
Yeah.. thanks..

Well.. I better finish it

Bonk
11-08-2008, 05:44 AM
Depending on how you look at it, it can seem like a funny cartoony run or a robotic choppy animation.

But you're definitely getting there bo.

zawmbee
11-08-2008, 05:46 AM
Depending on how you look at it, it can seem like a funny cartoony run or a robotic choppy animation.

Really?
Use your head.

Raffi
11-08-2008, 07:10 AM
Funny how when you added the [S] it looked like 'Finally some styleS'

As for the anim, the animation of the legs were good, but the upperboddy were really spazztic.

Saha
11-08-2008, 08:31 AM
I'm spazzylicious..

Go gavel.

Ssjbryando
11-08-2008, 10:32 AM
Mhm.

The legs are probably the best done. Watch the head, it keeps moving up and down, shaking crazy. Try to, uh, move it smoothly up and down, which mostly takes more then 1 frame. Also his back is very bend, making it look strange. Its not neccesary to bend it like that. Just watch yourself if you run. Your head doesn't bounce up and down like that, and you don't bend as much when you run.

Also try to extend the arms when he jumps, and pull them back in when he lands.

: \ lot wrongish, but I suck At C&Cing now sorry.

Hope that helped in the least.

Rabstar
11-08-2008, 10:38 AM
The legs are decent. I like 'em.
Just, the arms, are off..

Kitsune
11-08-2008, 12:48 PM
Hours for that?

Well it isn't bad, but
the knee moves to
high during the run.

For the last time
could you stop
talking like that it's
really annoying, and your
posts are messages, not
poems with a syllable or
alignment scheme, so why
the hell do you
so that anyway? >:(