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Beta
11-09-2008, 01:08 AM
Meh, very long story behind it, don't care to share it with anyone.

Took about 10 minutes

Bonk
11-09-2008, 01:11 AM
Needs more frames, more anticipation, more consistency with the face and body shape, and more lifelike features such as pupils.

Beta
11-09-2008, 01:14 AM
Maybe I did all of those things on purpose?
The face shape stays consistent...

I think your avatar should have a face, and I think that it should include more lifelike features like a face, but of course you probably meant it to be that way.

Bonk
11-09-2008, 01:34 AM
On purpose? Why would you do that :/?

The face doesn't stay constant. Look at it comparatively when the fist is at the very bottom and the very top. And by face I meant head.

Beta
11-09-2008, 01:40 AM
His mouth is open at one point, and clenched at another.

Lady Z
11-09-2008, 01:45 AM
neat hehe, i want to learn to make my easytoon teleport sorta thing, like you had.

Beta
11-09-2008, 01:46 AM
If you couldn't tell, I'm joking btw.
@Lady Z do you mean in my sig? Heh, it was something I figured out last summer and kind of added it to my style.

ace...
11-09-2008, 11:49 AM
well the animation itself is just "okay"
its nothing great. plus theres alot of problems such as:

the right arm is up on his chest like hes retarded or sumthin, and theres no sleve on it.
his face goes from smiling to frowning at the end, and hes not even looking at who hes hitting.

the chin goes from round to ponty
and he has no pupils.

BUT: i do like the blood partcles coming up from the bottom at the end.
i like the fact that decided to put an ear on his face
his nose shape was consistent, the fist was well draw, and it was smooth.

just keep working at it, and i know im a little bit picky, but hey, a lot of ppl are.

so keep going and good luck!

zawmbee
11-09-2008, 12:54 PM
Is he punching a back of potatoes? :3

Beta
11-09-2008, 01:24 PM
well the animation itself is just "okay"
its nothing great. plus theres alot of problems such as:

the right arm is up on his chest like hes retarded or sumthin, and theres no sleve on it.
his face goes from smiling to frowning at the end, and hes not even looking at who hes hitting.

the chin goes from round to ponty
and he has no pupils.

BUT: i do like the blood partcles coming up from the bottom at the end.
i like the fact that decided to put an ear on his face
his nose shape was consistent, the fist was well draw, and it was smooth.

just keep working at it, and i know im a little bit picky, but hey, a lot of ppl are.

so keep going and good luck!

As for the chin thing, his mouth is open when he's looking down and closed when he's looking away, and he's also clenching his mouth. The reason he's looking away because he's a badass mother****er. He's beating the person or whatever to the point that he doesn't even want to look.

.:MATT:.
11-11-2008, 06:22 PM
i think its great

jrock890
11-12-2008, 09:29 PM
As for the chin thing, his mouth is open when he's looking down and closed when he's looking away, and he's also clenching his mouth. The reason he's looking away because he's a badass mother****er. He's beating the person or whatever to the point that he doesn't even want to look.

every1 seems 2 be dissing ur animation :Ohhhhh:

jrock890
11-12-2008, 09:54 PM
me again lol just testin 2 see if ma new signature worked

billster-knight
11-12-2008, 10:04 PM
well, it didn't work

.:MATT:.
11-13-2008, 06:33 PM
i like it

its good

Beta
11-13-2008, 08:48 PM
every1 seems 2 be dissing ur animation :Ohhhhh:

Go suck a ****ing cock, or get the the **** off of this ****ing forum you twat.
I ****ing hate you.

unique
11-13-2008, 09:48 PM
Penis amirite?
you should just stay at Droidz forums Beta.

Beta
11-13-2008, 09:50 PM
did you ****ing forget ive been ****ing ip banned for 7 ****ing months?
I got unbanned at a different house I go to, but DD ****ing deletes all of my accounts as soon as I make them.

And everyone there is stupid. And annoying as shit.
But people here are pretty annoying too.

Joose
11-13-2008, 10:26 PM
Then maybe you should leave the internet all together, get a life, and stop making pointless insults.

Beta
11-15-2008, 10:21 PM
But I can't make life work.
D:

You don't know me, maaaan