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jomax
11-14-2008, 11:42 AM
Tried out some sketching. It turned out good I think, better than anything i've made so far. Please give some constructive critisism, what to improve etc.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=667215

And goddamn making blood look OK is hard :(

EDIT: I took my time and "unsketched" it.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=870632

EDIT2: Added hair, some shadows and a silly background


EDIT3: Here's with the faces. Turned out ok i guess.

http://www.stonesbucket.com/upload/view_upload.php?id=Z2xQqPJ8

NCz
11-14-2008, 04:27 PM
unsketched version gave me a


SEIZURE

Kitsune
11-14-2008, 04:29 PM
That was badass. Nice fullbody, nice motions.

RawGreen
11-14-2008, 04:39 PM
alright, I'm back up off the floor.

You did an awesome job, it's just those red flashes, they drive me bonkers. Change them :(

jomax
11-14-2008, 05:02 PM
Okay, sorry about that, fixed it now. Thanks for the comments!

I'm not sure if it goes to slow or not, maybe I should up the fps, what do you think?

RawGreen
11-14-2008, 05:10 PM
the fps is perfect .

jomax
11-15-2008, 11:51 AM
Okey, added some hair, shadow and a background

Kitsune
11-15-2008, 01:37 PM
The sun's a bit small, don't you think?

Otherwise it's super sexy. Now for some practice, I'd flip the switch to "perfectionism" and try at faces to reflect reactions, emotions, and all that good stuff. Then I'd be really impressed.

jomax
11-15-2008, 05:59 PM
I can try but i think that's way over my level :|

Kitsune
11-15-2008, 06:02 PM
There is no limit in animation. If you think about how faces look and plan it out, animation isn't that ungodly difficult in any case.

jomax
11-16-2008, 04:36 AM
okay they have faces now. I guess i could make a better background or something...

Any other stuff to add?