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dawG
11-14-2008, 05:04 PM
For the Allstar Collab.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=135512


EDIT: It's not for the shitty allstar collab.

zawmbee
11-14-2008, 05:12 PM
Too much text, argh D:

dawG
11-14-2008, 05:16 PM
Hmm .

M3D
11-14-2008, 05:20 PM
Didn't get it.
Not enough animation.
Nice background though.

dawG
11-14-2008, 05:44 PM
Use your mind then.

M3D
11-14-2008, 05:46 PM
Did.
Still don't get it.
Wasn't funny =/

Hyun
11-14-2008, 05:49 PM
...wut? o_o

.....no action?

RawGreen
11-14-2008, 06:00 PM
I liked the reactions, they were pertty good.

Kitsune
11-14-2008, 06:22 PM
Not bad. I'd show tim.... You seem to only be showing the person who's doing.....well nothing. This saves you time, but it shows in the outcome.

-Hawk-
11-15-2008, 12:51 AM
If I were Drifts I wouldn't let you in. You guys have no respect for collaborators adding a s***load of text. All you're going to do is lower the score and make people get bored while reading A S***LOAD OF TEXT. And anyway, you're not supposed to show your entry. >_<

Saha
11-15-2008, 03:19 AM
The amount of immaturity in this thread is astounding. Gosh, you guys grow up! Comment on the animation. When you're done commenting go away. You don't have to start an argument just to make the whole thing "funnier" for yourselves. The guy asked for comments, give him comments ON HIS ANIMATION, not his ego, nobody cares about his ego in this thread (or at least shouldn't) because this is the FLASH section.

Also... I think I was kind of hurried in calling Lixu veteran... After all the style is just a replica and can be done easier than an original one. Keep on practicing, Lixu, you'll be veteran one day, but it's a bit too early to say it by now. :)

Good job. I know you cc'd. But, it sounded like you were babbling.

Well yeah, like what others said. But the whole anim was rather slow. The throws especially.

dawG
11-15-2008, 03:57 AM
Well Hawk.

**** you, I acutally don't care a shit about you, dickweed.
Now leave me alone, kids.

Btw: Saha don't tell me what to do you animation suck, aight.

Saha
11-15-2008, 07:11 AM
Frigid, I know what is what. Just because my animations suck means I don't know the basics?

I said that the anim was slow. Can't accept it? Go die.

Rabstar
11-15-2008, 07:30 AM
Well, there is too much text, the anim seems gd, but well.. It aint that...Sense of action, sense of something "omg, something going to happe- BOOOM!"
lololl

Kitsune
11-15-2008, 01:18 PM
I thought I was being helpful. ;-;

Request
11-15-2008, 01:48 PM
There's not much to get, they get in a fight and do what people do when they break up.

I like it.

Though there should be more happening.

dawG
11-16-2008, 05:27 AM
Thanks Kitsune and Uni-bomber.

unique
11-16-2008, 10:21 PM
It was pretty much just stretching that stick figure.

Not much movement.

And i got it, i don't know how M3D doesn't get it.

dawG
11-17-2008, 07:04 AM
M3D is kinda retarded, that's why he didn't get it.

-Hawk-
11-17-2008, 11:19 AM
The plot is kind of stupid though. You are stupid as well. Take comments and shut up. I don't see any sense in a guy missing a baseball throw and another guy suddenly throwing tennis and football equipment to the guy. If you do YOU must be retarded. Think your plot better.

dawG
11-17-2008, 11:26 AM
Hawk, just keep talking shit.

Saha
11-17-2008, 11:30 AM
Just close the thread.

dawG
11-17-2008, 11:49 AM
No you and Hawk just need to stfu, then everybody is fine.

Hyun
11-17-2008, 02:56 PM
It's just one of those "wah-wah-waaaah" jokes, where it's not really funny, but everyone knows it's expected to be funny.

I say you add some good gory slapstick humor... works all the time for the young generation these days... :D

Like after the guy says 'take all your shit', make him throw the crap with some real force and a whole bunch of stuff too, like a bowling ball, sharp cleets that get stuck on his face, a javelin, etc... it's just my idea though if you're planning to improve it or not.