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Optic
11-14-2008, 07:03 PM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=395229

My first animation in flash, only used the 30 trial, im going to have to save money for like, a year.
I also know that the sticks are wobbly, other C&C would be helpful, theres alot.

EDIT: Just made another. :D

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=65706

EDIT: One more... "-.-

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=291970

Clips
11-14-2008, 07:05 PM
woW first flash thats awesome, the beam thing is probably better than what i can do, blood wasnt too good and the smoke wasnt too good either but for first flash its AWESOME =)

Kitsune
11-14-2008, 07:07 PM
Nice for a first. I suggest running everything a little slower by adding a few more frames to each of your motions.

Bonk
11-14-2008, 07:20 PM
You just need easing (as in, acceleration frames) Then you would already be better than a handful of people who've been here for a while.

Optic
11-14-2008, 09:17 PM
Wow, thanks for the Critique, I appreciate it. I just made another, and I took in a little bit of what your guys said. Its still probably not eased in some sports though.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=65706

Bonk
11-14-2008, 09:18 PM
Hm, now you're problem seems to be size changing.

Also, get a feel for gravity and arcing, because the leap felt off.

Optic
11-14-2008, 09:24 PM
Crap, I just noticed the resizing too. I also know that the ark was bad, but I couldnt really get a feel for how to do it.

RawGreen
11-14-2008, 09:25 PM
some particles are chunky, and the fps should be increased, arms need to be longer.

this is one of the greatest first flashes I've seem in a long while, you show talent.

Omega
11-14-2008, 09:49 PM
Very good for your first flash animation.
Many parts had easing and were relatively smooth. The effects were very good for your first flash animation as well.

You've used other animating programs, haven't you? Like, Easytoon?

Optic
11-14-2008, 10:15 PM
Wow, I show talent. :D:D:D:D

@Omega, yea I have used easytoon, too bad I'll be going back to it.

Request
11-14-2008, 10:32 PM
Nice job, work on easing a little more, and force.

Gravity.

Optic
11-15-2008, 12:57 AM
Anooooother New one. Focus mainly on the feet, because i cant seem to get hands/arms right...

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=291970

Saha
11-15-2008, 03:01 AM
Pretty good. You should animate in 24 fps or 20.

How long have you been animating?

Optic
11-15-2008, 06:06 AM
Thanks, Ive been animting in easytoon for about 2-3 months, and Ive been animating with flash for about 3 days.

Kitsune
11-15-2008, 01:17 PM
It's good for 3 months, anyway.