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Saha
11-15-2008, 05:46 AM
http://www.swfme.com/view/1274212

I hate this the most.
I hated the run too. But I need cc on the whole thing.

Tuts if possible.

dawG
11-15-2008, 05:52 AM
No easing at all.
I understand why you hate it, cause I do too.

M3D
11-15-2008, 07:45 AM
Don't mind Frigid hes a nub and his animations just have text.

You look like your trying too hard, like your forcing yourself to get better.
Doing this makes you hate your anim, like its a job or something.
Go at your own pace and have fun while you animate.
That way, even though it might not be good, you will still say you like it.

Maybe someone could back me on what Im trying to say. Hopefully you understand.

Rabstar
11-15-2008, 07:53 AM
Don't mind Frigid hes a nub and his animations just have text.

You look like your trying too hard, like your forcing yourself to get better.
Doing this makes you hate your anim, like its a job or something.
Go at your own pace and have fun while you animate.
That way, even though it might not be good, you will still say you like it.

Maybe someone could back me on what Im trying to say. Hopefully you understand.

Hmm...He has a point. Animating is 9/10 ppl's hobby on SPP. It aint a job! Enjoy it!
I made sucky animations, and forced my self to get better, and I didnt even post it, I thought it was that bad..(wel, I think..lol)
I made that 5 sec anim happily, And I thought I was improving on it!

Ive been making tests, and I am starting not to use the grid. And my spacing is starting to imprve, to! ^^

jomax
11-15-2008, 09:17 AM
One thing i could say is that the red guy kicks the black one in the stomach, but the blood comes from the head?

And when he kicks you should follow it through, as in not bringing back the foot/leg in the next frame.

And here is a page with good tut's
http://www.stonesbucket.com/stickfigure.php

unique
11-15-2008, 10:17 AM
Well for starters, if you want to get any better.
Fix the stick figures.

Eg. the black stick figure had huge feet.

zawmbee
11-15-2008, 10:37 AM
What just happened?

Kitsune
11-15-2008, 01:26 PM
Blood was a bit too organized and in a row.
The run had no real landing on each step. Sorta looked like hovering with the feet stepping firmly on the ground...
The stick disappeared... Could you show us these things when they're more done so that these trips don't confuse/distract people from the other problems?
The rest seemed okay.