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supranova
11-16-2008, 08:40 PM
Havent goten around to actually posting something in a while it seems..

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=645480

I whiped this up in about 45 mins.

Spent most time on the blood, so if you have any tips on it, feel free to share. :)

EDIT: http://www.stonesbucket.com/upload/view_upload.php?id=cKGdKHU7

katsuo
11-16-2008, 08:45 PM
repost wont let me see it

AppleSauze
11-16-2008, 09:02 PM
maybe add more blood x3

Request
11-16-2008, 09:13 PM
Pretty nice, add some sound, and more blood.

It was to dull as is.

Aycaramba
11-17-2008, 12:57 AM
Yea, more blood.
Eveything else was good.

unique
11-17-2008, 01:10 AM
Smooth..
But just blood.

Clips
11-17-2008, 01:34 AM
make the pause a tinsy bit smaller, like a miniscule smaller. somehow
it was gud man moar blood n its fine =)

supranova
11-17-2008, 02:13 PM
Thank you for the crit.

More blood and less dullness it is!

dawG
11-17-2008, 03:15 PM
Yeah sound and a bit more blood.
It was good.

katsuo
11-17-2008, 07:32 PM
ya totally agree with them moar blood more non dullness
lulage

Frost
11-18-2008, 07:51 PM
other upload site please? cant see stonesbucket and the trupload isnt workin

Upps
11-18-2008, 07:58 PM
That is a jugular blood, you should make the blood squirt out.
Really smooth, little slow though.