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leo4life
03-13-2008, 10:58 AM
aight, thanks to you people for the support, im gona try real hard on it,
heres the last preview, 36 secs long, thanks for the suport people
i decided to call the movie "untained" dunno why, im not creative with titles. lol, suggestions could be helpful
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/imcATT96-k0z

flost dont work?, here. http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/429418

inspiration by,
entanglement
shock1-2
phase-10


btw, i is a noob =D

Ssjbryando
03-13-2008, 11:26 AM
I like it. BUT, there where some things wrong. Like, the movements, they missed easing, and psy most of the times. But like I said it wasn't bad. and it was good you put some effects in it, but most of the effects are really wobby, and shakky, but those weren't so bad either. the length is good, but gets kinda boring. Good that you put effects in it to catch my attention, but I already said what I said about those.

good job tho.

leo4life
03-13-2008, 12:31 PM
thanks lol, i made the begining boring on purpose, so that it gets more and more intense

ragingrasengan
03-13-2008, 12:45 PM
its good, but like ssjbryando said, ease it a bit more, and somehits didnt have that much force look and power, just try easing it a bit more, but nice idea, ur like a...mini-terkoiz like thing ( i mean that in a good way ) keep it up, i hope to u see as a great animator.

T Man
03-13-2008, 12:54 PM
i saw a lot of it being ripped, but other than that. cool. movements need work along with particles

Mesmay
03-13-2008, 01:00 PM
Oh shi-
I swear thats the same music as the music me and strills are going to use in WOW1...
But nice animation. It was enjoyable.

leo4life
03-13-2008, 01:06 PM
lol, im not using this song, i just have it up there for the hell of it, and t man, u always say my stuff is rippied off somthing, its my ideaaaaaa with a black and white bg

leo4life
03-13-2008, 03:40 PM
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/imcATT96-k0z LAST TIME, I SWEAR, NO MORE. lol i fount the music i wanted to use, check it out

T Man
03-13-2008, 07:32 PM
lol, im not using this song, i just have it up there for the hell of it, and t man, u always say my stuff is rippied off somthing, its my ideaaaaaa with a black and white bg

no its not.

I saw at least three things ripped from other movies of which i wont go into.

i never said you ripped black and white bg's. those are just generic.

btw: songs doesn't fit

leo4life
03-13-2008, 07:41 PM
i honestly do not no what ur talking about, if u see anything that looks ripped off, its probally just a coincidence, i made up the square and circle bg, and fighting movements.

btw, do u have a tutorial on how u make ur effects, entanglement was godly =O

Schwa
03-13-2008, 09:34 PM
Well you seem to have the basic idea on effects, you just need to spend more time making them disapear and break into smaller pieces.

SSOutPhase
03-13-2008, 09:37 PM
Isn't that song from Star Fox? >_>

Nice so far. I think it's a little too fast though. FPS may be too high. Still nice work though. :D

leo4life
03-13-2008, 09:40 PM
lol, finaly fantasy

Kitsune
03-13-2008, 09:44 PM
The third, first, and second to last time you used particles on the energy needs more separation. By this I mean just cutting it up more into many more particles to fade away

SSOutPhase
03-13-2008, 09:51 PM
lol, finaly fantasy

OH YEAH!!! "Those Who Fight"

I coulda sworn it sounded like Star Fox: Assault

=/

mraznbuddy
03-13-2008, 10:36 PM
nice animation, it can be adjusted still. maybe practice making the sticks not as wobbly and make the particles go in one direction, they seem to go all over a certain area. But its not that bad. keep it up.

lol and before u said it was from final fantasy i thought it was from super smash bros. i knew the song though, it was like at the tip of my tongue lol

T Man
03-14-2008, 12:41 AM
no i don't have a tutorial on my effects. i have my secrets :X

leo4life
03-14-2008, 02:09 AM
reavel, themmm..... =o....

Raffi
03-14-2008, 02:35 AM
Wow, I love the fact you're improving fast like a... wtf.

It's higher quality than the RockLee anim, and it's less of a ripoff.
The sudden BANG with the metal clinging or whatever didn't really fit with the rest of the sounds.

milafa
03-14-2008, 06:40 AM
that was nice. 1 thing (off topic) maybe you could continue shin with flash :D
that would rock!!!

leo4life
03-14-2008, 08:27 AM
Wow, I love the fact you're improving fast like a... wtf.

It's higher quality than the RockLee anim, and it's less of a ripoff.
The sudden BANG with the metal clinging or whatever didn't really fit with the rest of the sounds.

like i told t-man, if u see anything that might be rippied from another anime, its just a coincidence, i made dis sht all up in my head

Chunky
03-14-2008, 08:32 AM
Well, I watched this with no sound, and it was pretty awesome.

Miccool
03-14-2008, 08:46 AM
Read lf2's tutorial...

leo4life
03-14-2008, 09:55 AM
link, me plzzzzzzzzz