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Bonk
11-21-2008, 09:36 PM
After a terrible stick animation, I made a little short warm up (http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=424463) to get me back into fullbody.

I've never shaded before, so yeah I know that sucks. C&C

Saha
11-21-2008, 09:44 PM
I love it.

I never knew you were so good in flash.
Though, you need to work on the wobblyness of the arm.

Movements too. I'm no expert. But I saw the flaws.

Bonk
11-21-2008, 11:00 PM
Be more specific with "movements"?

:3

Saha
11-21-2008, 11:40 PM
Like at the end after the kick his hand at the top was still moving. It isn't natural.

dawG
11-22-2008, 04:46 AM
I didn't see any wobblyness on the arm?

It was ****ing great!

WeaT
11-22-2008, 05:20 AM
that's ggreat BUT if that guy is like his back is at our site why his head is on top... ? damn hard to explain... if you know what i mean his head is all the time in front... -_-

Bonk
11-22-2008, 06:52 AM
Ooo yeah I didn't notice that. Thanks

Rabstar
11-22-2008, 06:57 AM
I love the actual pose and look of how the guy looked like, just...the movements needed tweaking

Aycaramba
11-22-2008, 07:04 AM
The movements were not really good, maybe remove some frames?

Mesmay
11-22-2008, 07:07 AM
thats sweet.

Apart from the way the hands kept switching from
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/uploads/455732hand1.jpg
to
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/uploads/889972hand2.jpg

Change that and Ill think its great.

Obviously its very stop-start, if you understand, but I quite like that. Others might not, but w/e >_> its something to consider changing.

Bonk
11-22-2008, 05:43 PM
Yeah I always like big heavy stop start movements , thanks yall

Lixu
11-23-2008, 04:34 AM
Change the head, it is ugly and ruins the body with the movements.