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jonnywonny333
11-22-2008, 11:05 AM
this is what i would call a full combo http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/8577/wowout7.gifhere is a link incase you cant see it ;)http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/8577/wowout7.gif oh the last part where he sudenly jumps onto the air i got bored and ya know.. deiced to put somthing random in there

Rabstar
11-22-2008, 11:10 AM
Potential. Nice...Bit more easing needed though. ^^

jonnywonny333
11-22-2008, 11:15 AM
Potential. Nice...Bit more easing needed though. ^^

glad to hear that :D

humm where tho?

Rabstar
11-22-2008, 11:21 AM
After each movement, maybe add 1 more frame
That beam was awsome, I loved it. ^^

jonnywonny333
11-22-2008, 11:28 AM
go postive feeback! okay lol so i add one more frame after each movement ill try :)


EDIT: i was thinking about getting pro motion and coloring it in ? u think i should?

dawG
11-22-2008, 11:35 AM
Needs easing, and it wasn't that smooth.

jonnywonny333
11-22-2008, 11:39 AM
Needs easing, and it wasn't that smooth.


:| not so postive feed back ..... lol XD but i know i just got started on easing it but i messed up and needed to start over so if i work hard i might be done by tommorow :)

the darkest white
11-22-2008, 03:08 PM
Mmm yea needs bit more easing but otherwise great. Loved the beam.

cherrybombs8
11-22-2008, 05:00 PM
work on the small amounts of resizing.

great job. it looks like pivot; kinda like my style in a way.

jonnywonny333
11-22-2008, 05:53 PM
coming from you and the darkest white! wow you guys r like my idols too lol :D thanks a lot!

jonnywonny333
11-22-2008, 06:41 PM
double post omg?!! lol but i haf an update to it very very small update tho D: all i didi was add blur to when he jumps http://img117.imageshack.us/my.php?image=uhhuh1co4.gif thar you go ;) lol

linky!! (http://img117.imageshack.us/my.php?image=uhhuh1co4.gif)

the darkest white
11-22-2008, 07:16 PM
You should have added extra frames, not trails.
Also now that I look at it the way his back bends is pretty bad, backs are meant to flex, not turn at right angles.

jonnywonny333
11-22-2008, 09:05 PM
Also now that I look at it the way his back bends is pretty bad, backs are meant to flex, not turn at right angles.

humm... wel i was using line tool soo i could always go back and either mutli-joint- it or use pencil...

Karoh
11-23-2008, 02:36 AM
what nice, but he was kinda stiff when he was attacking, and his movements were like broken :/ cant think of a word... the flame was (thumbs up!), alos didnt like the jumping wooho ? because was stiff, and when u land, u always bend a little ur knees to ease your fall, so should the stickmen do also :/

puinkey
11-23-2008, 02:50 AM
needs easing . tho I luved your beam , uhhhh .......... black thingy .
try adding a frame after the actions .
but the movement in the frames are smaller .
It should be okay after adding those frames .

Good luck !

the darkest white
11-23-2008, 06:36 AM
I also use the line tool for backs, just use the line tool in small parts to create a smooth ish curve. that usually works best for me.

jonnywonny333
11-23-2008, 09:08 AM
okay thanks everyone! and the beam was my first on in easytoon :D i took no tuts too