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jonnywonny333
11-23-2008, 10:59 AM
here is my very first flash! enjoy :tell me what to improve on and if you want to make me happy for once suggest a tutorial (a really good one for newbs..) http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=977755

update:http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=654473
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=804578
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=325117
and
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=411426


Update #2: whooho first flash art type thing! http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=272951
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=566262

update #3:http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=546890

jomax
11-23-2008, 11:03 AM
That was pure awesomeness for a first flash.

I guess you just came from using pivot? Otherwise damn you are gifted. Probably better than
what I could do with sticks :|

Hyun
11-23-2008, 11:04 AM
DUDE JONNY my WONNY! That was great for your first flash man! Congrats! =D
you have a great sense of force/reaction already and you even have some trails in there at the right places.

I think the next step for you would probably be just working on stick construction and I have a small tutorial on youtube for that.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOouzsIPNWs

See if that helps you at all. If not there's another great site full of tuts.
http://www.stonesbucket.com/tutorials.php

Keep animating man

Karoh
11-23-2008, 11:06 AM
hmm.. its way better than my first one :P im even a shame to show it :P ur pretty darn good for 1st one :/ ... i see ull have a bright future :D :D
on the ani, try some easing, adding little frames, on hits so the hit would pause a little... weird movement, but its ur first.. hey and also did u use brush, line, pencil for ur ani??

jonnywonny333
11-23-2008, 11:07 AM
:D :D im soo happy thanks al lot i took a whole lot of tuts before i started :) really thanks a lot man both of you! :D and i will take the tut maybe ill subsribe t u on you tube :heh: lol and plus i didnt thin it looked well maybe cuz all of the good animatiors animations are uhm.. good and then i run to look at mine and they look like crap compared to theirs lol


EDIT: i used brush ;)

RawGreen
11-23-2008, 11:39 AM
heh, that tutorial you found helped even me :)

for a first this is pretty good, I suggest you do whats in that tutorial. But don't forget to do what you like, you're not on a contract :)

Rabstar
11-23-2008, 11:44 AM
Jonny man, ur really good at flash. That animation, well sure, it wasnt the best, but for a first, that was awsome. ^^

Keep it up, and hyun will be able to help you a lot!

jonnywonny333
11-23-2008, 12:09 PM
thanks every one for all the postive feed back ill make another one and pst it here maybe by tommorow!

jonnywonny333
11-23-2008, 06:08 PM
double post of dooom! lol but here it is i spent about.. 5 hours making it D: any way here it is:D http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=545630

Hope you liked it :)

Edit: new one : http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=143347

jonnywonny333
11-24-2008, 02:29 PM
okay so here is an explosion test (srry for tripple post) ;_; http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=525443

Update: http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=250599 so after i watched hyuns tut i decied to make sumthing using that style! and i added my own twist :) different colered heads!

puinkey
11-24-2008, 06:50 PM
yay afro hair explosion :D

I like your first few flashes.
keep it up "JW" ^^

jonnywonny333
11-24-2008, 07:25 PM
yay afro hair explosion :D

I like your first few flashes.
keep it up "JW" ^^


XD afro hair explosion lol and thanks... now about "JW" its almost catchy i sorta like it :D

Cizzil
11-24-2008, 07:55 PM
anyways good particles, work more on movements

jonnywonny333
11-25-2008, 02:23 PM
okay thanks but remember these are just my first couple so dont be too
rough ;D


EDIT: omg!! brand new one! http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=272951


yea yea know its not an animationmore like art :D those are the characters im gunna use for sum flashes from now on!!

Hyun
11-25-2008, 06:14 PM
nice man! You're sticks are starting to look a lot more serious now that you moved out from the 'nub' sticks. Keep it up

jonnywonny333
11-25-2008, 06:25 PM
:D yay now i gotta work on movements a little bit more :) and easing and look at a tut on runing and walking ..i should make a wlkin test

Scarecrow
11-25-2008, 07:31 PM
Great work for a beginner. I'm guessing you have had some experience with other programs before this?

jonnywonny333
11-25-2008, 07:50 PM
Great work for a beginner. I'm guessing you have had some experience with other programs before this?

yep sumwith easy toon and pivot ;D

heres a try at a runnin loop its a filure tho D: http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=546890

RawGreen
11-26-2008, 02:04 PM
yep sumwith easy toon and pivot ;D

heres a try at a runnin loop its a filure tho D: http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=546890

hint for the line tool. Push v or q(they're different types of select tools but they work around the same), and if you move over the middle of the line you should see a curve under the cursor, you can click and drag the mouse to bend the line. If you move it over a corner or bend yu can move it around and stretch it and stuff :p

jonnywonny333
11-26-2008, 05:12 PM
Thanks :D heres a new one its a test of the "the clan's" wepons and powers

(the clan is the picture i made in flash :D) http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=776633 :D

RawGreen
11-26-2008, 07:28 PM
Thanks :D heres a new one its a test of the "the clan's" wepons and powers

(the clan is the picture i made in flash :D) http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=776633 :D

alright, this one is great, though I will advise you to clean up better when you're done, one of the frames with Jared, a copy of his head is in the corer with your name.

you're doing quite well :3

jonnywonny333
11-26-2008, 07:45 PM
thanks a lot ;D and i just noticed that i guess it was a glitch cuz i never put it there D: i guess i should clean it up :)

RawGreen
11-26-2008, 07:59 PM
thanks a lot ;D and i just noticed that i guess it was a glitch cuz i never put it there D: i guess i should clean it up :)

I wouldn't exactly call it a glitch, but more of an accident? The glitches with flash is usually much more bizarre than this. You use copy and paste right? this would be the most reasonable explanation for this. I know that it's happened to me before :o

jonnywonny333
11-26-2008, 08:19 PM
;) lol i just cleanded it upill get rid of that version and post the new clean one later :D

M3D
11-27-2008, 12:18 AM
Yo check those links on your first post.
Most of them don't work.

Rabstar
11-27-2008, 12:30 AM
the run wasnt that good
The picture was hawt. Nice. where ami though? xD

jonnywonny333
11-27-2008, 11:39 AM
Yo check those links on your first post.
Most of them don't work.

:O kk thanx M3D ill try to get them up on a different place ;)

Rab what anim ? like for the ppl its on the 2nd page last post..
Edit: kay so i re uploaded every anim lolz and the new "clan tests so it should work if it doesn tell me and im going to use a different place.. BTW cleanded up version up the clan tests is up in the first post :D

katsuo
11-28-2008, 11:16 AM
wow dude u got good really really fast... just one thing like hyun said work on stick constuction... seems u got the whole "make the head a symbol to animate it easier" down.... and also do more little tests dont worry about the bigg projects yet... u are going to be really really good some day... just keep animating man...

EDIT: oh and also look at some big projects I.E. collabs mania's any thing u can find... also find some one who's style u like kinda go along that style and make ur own adjustments...

jonnywonny333
11-28-2008, 01:17 PM
thanks a lot :D and i always look at the biggies on the home page :) plus i didnt think i changed that much but thanks a lot

RawGreen
11-28-2008, 08:38 PM
thanks a lot :D and i always look at the biggies on the home page :) plus i didnt think i changed that much but thanks a lot

Btw, you should look into more than JUST their big projects. I suggest you try looking at BeyondRage(also known as Oni-Meh)

I also like Just solo, I've seen how he animates through a tutorial :D it's quite easy and you can raise the fps as much as you like as long as you have the patience to add an extra frame or two.

see here plz:
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=96302

jonnywonny333
11-30-2008, 06:23 PM
BUMP! thanks rawgreen :3 altho when i go to look at RAGE mainia it doesn't appear.. and i cant see it D: wat do i do plz help (help MUCH
apreciated)