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Mantha
03-14-2008, 10:49 AM
Inspired by Byakuya Kuchiki. I hate the hand.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs30/i/2008/074/0/e/Dying_Man_by_Manthur.jpg

Doomdooer
03-14-2008, 10:54 AM
Yeah, I also dislike the hand. It looks like a Mario glove.
Other than that, stuff looks good.
The clothes are styling, and the face is good for the perspective we have.

I love the effect the petals have on the whole mood of it.

Mantha
03-14-2008, 12:48 PM
ok, gracias

alright, fine guys, you don't have to comment

the drawing sucks anyway and im not kidding

Covalence
03-14-2008, 01:41 PM
Eh, no offense, but that sucks compared to your earlier works. =/

Although, I did like the petals, and the blood stain on the shoulder.

Oblivion EX
03-14-2008, 03:41 PM
'Cept for the hand, i like it. like dark said, (just summed up) It's not your best work.

better than i can do though.

‹berschall
03-14-2008, 05:41 PM
I actually like it. It lacks atmosphere though.

Epic
03-14-2008, 09:06 PM
Looks nice. Looks more like a detail then a drawing, compared to your other works. All it really need is a decent background, or shade for the background, or something. The hands not that bad, just kind of in an unrealistic position for what he's doing. It's really not that bad, looks nice.

Mantha
03-15-2008, 08:15 AM
Mmkay guise. Thanks. I seriously need to practice more.

And none taken, Dark. Everybody can always honestly tell me "looks like shit", I can deal with the crit. :)

And thanks for your post, Epic. You always give me most helpful tips, AYAYAYAYAY.

shudokai
03-16-2008, 09:45 PM
it could look better if the background getting darker on the edges of the pic!
sorry if you dont understand what i want to say, its 3 am and my english is so good, and im f***ing tired :P