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antny336
03-14-2008, 05:33 PM
orange
the word that aint got no rhyme
you can try, and try, and try to find
a rhyme for orange, but not this time
so until someone comes up with florange
gorange
snorange
or fiddlie-dorange
i guess the word with no rhyme
will have to be orange

Kitsune
03-14-2008, 05:37 PM
B-but you rhymed it!

antny336
03-14-2008, 05:38 PM
yah, but i made up the rhymes

Kitsune
03-14-2008, 05:57 PM
Owned (http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=florange). . .

antny336
03-14-2008, 06:01 PM
no, you got owned, if u read the note.... he said he made it up speshly to rhyme with orange, he just posted it


ba- baa-- baaaaam!

‹berschall
03-14-2008, 07:01 PM
And guess who got owned, you, because the italic writing is an EXAMPLE of usage.

antny336
03-14-2008, 07:03 PM
i wasn't talking about the italics, on the third thing he says "note:" and gives a note
still owned

‹berschall
03-14-2008, 07:10 PM
Still the poem sucks. It's out of order with the syllables and has no rythm.

FizzlemanJ
03-14-2008, 07:20 PM
You understand it's a slang dictionary, right?

Gavel
03-14-2008, 08:55 PM
i wasn't talking about the italics, on the third thing he says "note:" and gives a note
still owned
I don't see how that still makes him the one being owned. The origin of the word shouldn't mean anything.

And yes, Fizzle, it's a slang dictionary. But how many times a day do you use slang in your vocabulary? Exactly.

pagan
03-14-2008, 09:11 PM
how is this a poem?

antny336
03-14-2008, 09:45 PM
ok, i get it, the origin of it really shouldn't matter, but the point is, i didn't know it was a word, and really its not like i spent hours on the poem. i wrote it in like 5 minutes, and i sorta liked it. i know it's not the best poem in the world, but i wrote it, i posted it, and im not gonna change it because i accidentally came up with a real word

Gavel
03-14-2008, 09:47 PM
wait spazz, i dun get it, are u arguing on my side?
Reading skills not working today?

antny336
03-14-2008, 09:52 PM
yah i know, i just skimmed it rlly, but i edited it

Buttons
03-14-2008, 09:56 PM
Door Hinge. Retards .

antny336
03-14-2008, 10:02 PM
lol, dude thats a cheat
fiddlie-dorange is better

Buttons
03-14-2008, 10:17 PM
Go kill yourself. Please.

Gavel
03-14-2008, 11:23 PM
ok, i get it, the origin of it really shouldn't matter, but the point is, i didn't know it was a word, and really its not like i spent hours on the poem. i wrote it in like 5 minutes, and i sorta liked it. i know it's not the best poem in the world, but i wrote it, i posted it, and im not gonna change it because i accidentally came up with a real word

Yeah well, you shouldn't make a thread for everything you work on for 5 minutes and sort of like.

antny336
03-15-2008, 11:45 AM
true, but i don't. you should see how many drawings and stories and poems that i haf all over my "studio" as i like to call it

alive
03-15-2008, 08:44 PM
how is this a poem?

How is it not a poem?

pagan
03-16-2008, 01:04 AM
How is it not a poem?

i don't think a poem is any group of phrases that kind of rhyme, in the same way literature isn't a chinese take-out menu or a note you write to your mom.

Kitsune
03-19-2008, 09:58 PM
i don't think a poem is any group of phrases that kind of rhyme, in the same way literature isn't a chinese take-out menu or a note you write to your mom.
Well a poem is a piece of literature to express meaning, but there are variations in the literary art within it.

Too bad this isn't art. It's a bored teen or pre-teen basically hitting the keyboard for five minutes and making words out of letter patterns that come up.

Don't doubt my logic, sir antny. I frequently use florange in my everyday vocabulary.

I would've come back sooner to this thread if I knew two pages of argument was caused by my link.

imported_SPARTAN_117
03-20-2008, 01:15 AM
That was really stupid.

Paco
03-20-2008, 01:40 AM
i think you made a typo,
by silly you ment shitty.

Raffi
03-20-2008, 08:30 AM
I lol'd.

Both at Paco's post AND the failiure of the poem.

antny336
03-29-2008, 02:02 AM
wow u people r so supportive and kind

pagan
03-29-2008, 02:57 AM
**** you asshole