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Covalence
11-30-2008, 01:09 AM
24 FPS:
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=101672

21 FPS:
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=242937

I am aware of:

-Wobblyness
-Minor resizing
-Too short

Maybe next time I'll make a longer combo, or an actual fight. Also, which FPS better suits me?

jomax
11-30-2008, 03:28 AM
I think 21fps looks better

Raffi
11-30-2008, 03:33 AM
Start at a low fps, and rise till you find a good fps. Or juts stick with what you find best.

Work on anticipation. he should slow down after the first punch, then speed up as he performs the uppercut.

Lixu
11-30-2008, 05:17 AM
I do not understand: You have 5000 posts, in an animation forum, and these are your first animations? Damn..

No easing
No anticipation
No effort

M3D
11-30-2008, 05:44 AM
I don't think he said they are his firsts...are they?

but yeah to be honest that was horrible....0_o
Study some anims and look at some tutorials dude.
Thats all I could say for now.

Raffi
11-30-2008, 08:58 AM
I do not understand: You have 5000 posts, in an animation forum, and these are your first animations? Damn..
Ever heard of someone called "2-D"?

Kitsune
11-30-2008, 10:56 AM
You're aware of a lot, so fix it. Brush tool sucks in flash, I understand, but the Contour editing tool (white arrow), properties for the brush tool to lower smoothing, etc. can all help I suppose. It wasn't awful. I suggest a backgrounds.

Covalence
11-30-2008, 11:52 AM
I do not understand: You have 5000 posts, in an animation forum, and these are your first animations? Damn..

No easing
No anticipation
No effort
never said these were my first animations, dick



I don't think he said they are his firsts...are they?

but yeah to be honest that was horrible....0_o
Study some anims and look at some tutorials dude.
Thats all I could say for now.
yeah, i know


thanks for the comments everyone else
fuck you lixu

Lixu
11-30-2008, 01:46 PM
never said these were my first animations, dick
It looks like this is your first time at flash



file:///C:/DOCUME%7E1/ADMINI%7E1/LOCALS%7E1/Temp/moz-screenshot.jpg
fuck you lixu
Can't handle the truth whiney boy?

aryuautku
11-30-2008, 01:49 PM
Guys stop blaming...But i really thought strider was animating good...Try to ease it.Smoother sticks,you know.

Kitsune
11-30-2008, 02:01 PM
Yw, Stridahr.


Can't handle the truth whiney boy?

You need to work on your insults A LOT. I've heard 4th grade insuult after 3rd grade insult from you recently and I suggest you go to insult boot camp soon.

Just needed to get that out there...

Covalence
11-30-2008, 02:05 PM
It looks like this is your first time at flash



file:///C:/DOCUME%7E1/ADMINI%7E1/LOCALS%7E1/Temp/moz-screenshot.jpg
Can't handle the truth whiney boy?

hohoho, great insults

listen, buddy, pal, fag, instead of letting your elitist personality do nothing but "insult" lower animators, you can try helping them out

all you ****ing did was say "omg sux," with no helpful advice

Kitsune
11-30-2008, 02:09 PM
file:///C:/DOCUME%7E1/ADMINI%7E1/LOCALS%7E1/Temp/moz-screenshot.jpg
Also, why are you giving us the path to a file on your computer?

Covalence
11-30-2008, 02:10 PM
hey man, licks ain't a word

Kitsune
11-30-2008, 02:15 PM
hey man, licks ain't a word

yuh huh!

Covalence
11-30-2008, 02:24 PM
i know it is, you just spelled it wrong

i never denied at all that licks isnt a word

i'd also like to add that im so ****ing great at uploading screenshots

Ssjbryando
11-30-2008, 02:27 PM
I do not understand: You have 5000 posts, in an animation forum, and these are your first animations? Damn..

No easing
No anticipation
No effort

Damn, you're an asshole to people >_>

But yea, add some more easing. Watch the wobblyness too, use onion skin if you haven't already. If you have, watch it more carefully. Also watch slight resizing. But yea, basically what everyone said.

Lixu
11-30-2008, 02:32 PM
hohoho, great insults

listen, buddy, pal, fag, instead of letting your elitist personality do nothing but "insult" lower animators, you can try helping them out

all you ****ing did was say "omg sux," with no helpful advice

Read my post again dipshit, I DID tell you what was wrong, wich should tell you what to work on.


hey man, licks ain't a word
What? I do not understand

yuh huh!
Nu-uh!

i know it is, you just spelled it wrong

i never denied at all that licks isnt a word

i'd also like to add that im so ****ing great at uploading screenshots
What? Please explain!

Damn, you're an asshole to people >_>
Damn, everytime you need to mind with someone else's buseniss, i dont believe your 13+....

Covalence
11-30-2008, 02:37 PM
Read my post again dipshit, I DID tell you what was wrong, wich should tell you what to work on.
hey man, it's not like a certain tutorial could help, or a good site

What? I do not understand

Nu-uh!

What? Please explain!
don't act like it didn't happen
yeah, that was when you were even more of an elitist faggot, where you got attacked if you posted outside of the animation section. you remember those good old days, right?

Damn, everytime you need to mind with someone else's buseniss, i dont believe your 13+....
awesome english
i love you

RawGreen
11-30-2008, 05:10 PM
try to work on movements.

also, go for 20 fps or 18 fps(for this animation?)

Kitsune
11-30-2008, 05:14 PM
Damn, everytime you need to mind with someone else's buseniss, i dont believe your 13+....

What Gavel said in the thread where he chumpetizes you.

Lixu
12-01-2008, 01:52 AM
What Gavel said in the thread where he chumpetizes you.
COUGH shutthe****upoutofpussytakendicksuckingmoderatoras skissingfatfitlessfemale COUGH

aryuautku
12-01-2008, 04:05 AM
God damn stop blaming.Strider maybe isn't new but he probably didn't animate for long.He just tried to share us an anim.

By the way,easing would be pwnage for this anim

Raffi
12-01-2008, 10:34 AM
What? I do not understand
Also this pathetic flame wart make me giggle, this post made me howl.


Assuming you're referring to what Lixu said when someone called him 'Licks you'.