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Raffi
11-30-2008, 10:26 AM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=403451
Update 2: http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=410376

First time animating rippling water, and I'm averag about it.


C&C

Also i realise the water suddenly rises towards the end. It got a little screwed D:

dawG
11-30-2008, 10:42 AM
As you said yourself, it suddenly rises towards the end..
But maybe more water splashes, if you know what I mean?

M3D
11-30-2008, 10:47 AM
When he lands in the water he should be there for longer. He swims up too fast.
Basically the physics and easing of the stick was very poor.
You should watch some videos on youtube to help more.

Tawnik
11-30-2008, 10:47 AM
Oh my god,i love it :D

it was so smooth I like the movements in the water,the line of the body,imo it was great,but yeah the water effect needs a bit work :)

edit,Med,I think the physics and easing of the stick was good..

Raffi
11-30-2008, 10:54 AM
As you said yourself, it suddenly rises towards the end..
But maybe more water splashes, if you know what I mean?
I thought there weren't enough so I added more. ;_;

When he lands in the water he should be there for longer. He swims up too fast.
Basically the physics and easing of the stick was very poor.
You should watch some videos on youtube to help more.
I saw it again and I agree he swims a little too fast upward.

Oh my god,i love it :D

it was so smooth I like the movements in the water,the line of the body,imo it was great,but yeah the water effect needs a bit work :)

edit,Med,I think the physics and easing of the stick was good..
Thanks and yeah I haven't been animating water that much :P


Improved vers: http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=410376

Kitsune
11-30-2008, 11:40 AM
The update was much nicer.

You could add a low alpha lighter splash along with the particles. I only suggest this because I don't think the dots are really enough. Just a thought.

Also note, not an important note, but the water level goes down to the end.

The overall water physics weren't that bad though. :D

dawG
11-30-2008, 11:41 AM
Yeah the update was jsut great!
Perfect!

Raffi
11-30-2008, 12:31 PM
The update was much nicer.

You could add a low alpha lighter splash along with the particles. I only suggest this because I don't think the dots are really enough. Just a thought.

The overall water physics weren't that bad though. :D
Thanks. Yeah i'll try that.


Also note, not an important note, but the water level goes down to the end.


It got a little screwed D:

RawGreen
11-30-2008, 06:22 PM
what the, is that a pit of goop?

Raffi
12-01-2008, 11:35 AM
First time animating rippling water, and I'm averag about it.
Ignorance really makes me wonder sometimes..