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Chunky
11-30-2008, 11:24 AM
this is tragically the best stick animation I've done in a while.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=644732

I have no idea how to make anyone getting hurt by jay, or how to stop the headband having a mind of its own.

any severity of C&C will be appreciated.

dawG
11-30-2008, 11:31 AM
Nice, shit.
But I dislike your bump >_>

Raffi
11-30-2008, 11:33 AM
Its sttiff and missing anticipation, but its not THAT bad.

Well, for a best animation by someone..


The real problem is the headband. haha

Chunky
11-30-2008, 11:36 AM
yeah the headband problem im having trouble with, but its not nearly as bad as the first attempt ;D and really its only the best because its taken a while to get back into my flow after all the full body ive been doing oolol

Raffi
11-30-2008, 11:39 AM
Work hard on gravity.



Really hard.













That's what I did.































































It turned out shit anyway.




























































































D:

Kitsune
11-30-2008, 12:13 PM
The headband you could have zoomed in to edit. Not bad.

Chunky
11-30-2008, 12:18 PM
I was at %400, i think i know why it looks so retarded. when i did the blur punch i tried to make the headband rush with the fist, but that musn't have worked. i'll edit it and see what happens.

Kitsune
11-30-2008, 12:22 PM
By that I meant it was sloppy. Try drawing it at 800 zoom with rectangles edited with the arrow button if you have the 20 more minutes it would take.

Chunky
11-30-2008, 12:25 PM
ooh rectangles! thats a better idea! i'll give it a go now

RawGreen
11-30-2008, 05:22 PM
the headband, it wont always be behind the head. also there's a constant pull downward,s though it will float a little.

katsuo
11-30-2008, 06:41 PM
the headband, it wont always be behind the head. also there's a constant pull downward,s though it will float a little.

love the friggen sig its amazing... u shoulda used shock2 tho its better i think...

about the anim... nice smooth needs less blurr tho... and headband: needs moar realistic physics.... its always floating...