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Covalence
03-14-2008, 10:26 PM
http://picshift.shiftlimits.com/files/75f33b53/8b1/swordsman.jpg

Yeah, easy guess for where I got the idea to draw this.

Oblivion EX
03-14-2008, 11:32 PM
argh. where is that from...

shudokai
03-16-2008, 10:47 PM
ehm, i dont like it, because the hands arent good and i hate chinese hats :P
but all in all its a pretty nice pic ^^

and dont hate me for critics

Covalence
03-17-2008, 04:46 PM
ehm, i dont like it, because the hands arent good and i hate chinese hats :P
but all in all its a pretty nice pic ^^

and dont hate me for critics

Why the **** would i hate you for pointing out the bad and good things? I'll only get pissed off if someone just says it's bad, and gives no reason why, or any advice to get better. Sort of like ob1.

Lag
03-17-2008, 04:51 PM
It's an overall good pic. Work on proportions, and I think It's easier to draw with a sharper pencil.

Covalence
03-17-2008, 04:52 PM
Yeah, I do too. My sharpener sucks though. =/

Thanks.

elite34
03-17-2008, 05:19 PM
It's an overall good pic. Work on proportions, and I think It's easier to draw with a sharper pencil.

Yea Advice in bold. It make it look light and weird looking. But I like it the hat you did a good job on.

Mantha
03-18-2008, 09:22 AM
Draw with a sharper pencil, yeah. But make the shades with the soft one. The right arm is out of proportions and I'd say the same for the left hand, unless you're going for the cartoonish look.The feet are too small.
Actually, the whole body just doesn't seem right.
I'd advise you to practice human body proportions. Just draw simplistic figures of human body as squares and circles. You'll get the hang of it soon.

The hat looks as if it was too small. If it's a straw hat then you did it wrong. Check some images of straw and learn their textures.

There's not much shading going on. The drawing seems flat.
And the line between the neck and the head is way too obvious.

Keep practicing k.

thedemonata
03-21-2008, 07:29 PM
That was pretty nice. But did you use the side of the pencil for the drawing.

mitsukai
03-21-2008, 08:47 PM
i think is was a graphite pencil. or charcoal ( fi i spelled that right

elite34
03-21-2008, 08:52 PM
i think is was a graphite pencil. or charcoal ( fi i spelled that right

It was a regular pencil most people don't use special pencils.

mitsukai
03-21-2008, 09:08 PM
-.- well im a special boy...jk

It accualy looks pretty cool

Covalence
03-21-2008, 09:10 PM
I used a number 2 pencil, the only "special" pencil I use is a sketching pencil.

And tbh, this is crap to me now.