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Omega
12-02-2008, 06:14 PM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=943807

I really think the effects suck, especially the smoke. The particles were just lazy; I can do much better than that. They're not finished either.

c and c anyway

Frost
12-02-2008, 06:37 PM
lol you just said everything i was going to crit on. and the smokes not that bad. nice movements

M3D
12-02-2008, 06:40 PM
Yo, that was smooth bro.
Nice, love the movements and reactions.

A bit shaky but thats okay.

RawGreen
12-02-2008, 06:57 PM
the smoke is better than what I can do :3

Vincent
12-02-2008, 07:00 PM
Lol, everything in that was better then what I can do :'... I didn't see anything blantantly wrong with it.

Omega
12-02-2008, 07:25 PM
Thanks guys. I paid no attention to effects; just the way the stickfigure moved.

More comments?

projectzeta
12-02-2008, 07:51 PM
Da.

Smoke was okay, not much wrong with it. The particles were kinda wonky, what were they, blood?

Omega
12-02-2008, 09:27 PM
Yeah, a weird kinda blood. They were just meant to add a little flavor to the animation.

Thanks though.

Aycaramba
12-03-2008, 12:18 AM
The stick was well eased, 20 fps amitrite?
Also, I think it looks better if you only blur the smoke the y or x axle, not both. But thats up to you.
Very good amimation.

Lixu
12-03-2008, 01:58 AM
Looks like the stick had deaths angel in him.

Pretty neat, nothing to critic on.

Omega
12-03-2008, 04:52 PM
The stick was well eased, 20 fps amitrite?
Also, I think it looks better if you only blur the smoke the y or x axle, not both. But thats up to you.
Very good amimation.

No, 24 fps with double framing.

Thanks for the comment.

Joseph the Great
12-14-2008, 08:02 PM
Wow that was great, but i think you need to do some more work on the angle of the camera movement so that life seems realistic.