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passos354
12-03-2008, 11:39 PM
ok this this maybe be good.. my 2nd fb anim..
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=435895

Scarecrow
12-03-2008, 11:44 PM
It's pretty good, but there isn't much animation. Reminds me of the cheap DBZ style where half of it is either just the camera panning or talking, and you get about 20 frames of actual movement in a whole episode

The dust also doesn't suit the rest of the animation, you should have fbf'd that too.

Otherwise it's good, proportions are right and it's drawn well.

tomocles
12-04-2008, 02:01 AM
good stuff, but the hand tightening seemed....weird. The hand lacked important details, making a weird fist, otherwise, stuff like the foot turning and all was well done.

projectzeta
12-04-2008, 05:15 PM
The art was pretty good, but the dash had no anticipation and looked unnatural. That, combined with the weird dust, made for a slight bad part that sorta spoiled it. :/